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Character Name: Puss in Boots
Series: [wikipedia]
Point in canon: After Puss in Boots, but before the Shrek movies.

Character Background and Personality: He's a lover, not a fighter. A thief with a heart of gold, Puss makes a living while flirting with both ladies and danger. The first scene he appears in has him stealing a ring off the hand of ( Read more... )