Season's Greetings. A Price On Your Head.

[foreignpetals]

The sewers in the park get really dark at night. I walk along the wall, stepping on the occasional rat as I tread deeper into the tunnel. A map which appears to be drawn in red and green crayons is my only guide across the maze that is the underground sewage system in Palomino

Comments

[freddyfishstyx]

Sorry to just post when you don't even know me,
I'm a friend of The Chawman's and noticed your post and the first line sucked me in.

That is just awesome.
Seriously, the writing style and where the twists come in is great.
Thanks for posting that, it really improved my day.

Don't let your ass hit the door on the way back to mother's bedroom.

[miss_ladybug]

Shut up.

Re: Don't let your ass hit the door on the way back to mother's bedroom.

[freddyfishstyx]

Excuse me?

An open door policy to fuck off.

[miss_ladybug]

Shut . . . your fucking . . . mouth.

you have issues

[anonymous]

So, let me get this straight - someone you don't know posts something nice, saying that your writing is good, and they get bitched out? You're really weird. If you don't want people you don't know posting or seeing your journal, then why bother posting where everyone can see?

If you were pregnant, your baby would be made of stupid.

[miss_ladybug]

Excuse me, but really, this is none of your business, whether it's somebody new or just the same fat asshole from before pretending that he's not the only one who feels like he has something interesting to say. All of your friends, I'm sure, are ugly.