I absolutely adore sukai. This was so cute and sweet and had my heart aching a lot. I'm so happy there was a good resolution in the end. ♥ And I really love the way you wrote them!
I’m just… I don’t have the words (I’ll try to put my love for this into words anyway, but… watch me fail miserably orz) I LOVED THIS SO MUCH I CAN’T EVEN… I CAN’T ENGLISH PROPERLY RIGHT NOW! It’s true that I haven’t read a lot of stories in this exchange yet, but it’s by far (BY FAR) my favorite and it’d probably still be my favorite if I went ahead and read every single story in this exchange. I can safely say it’s one of the best Sukai stories I have ever read. As a matter of fact it’s one of the best stories I’ve read. Ever. I JUST LOVE IT SO FREAKING MUCH! (We have guests, but here I am, trying to write you the comment this story deserves, but I honestly don’t know how I’m supposed to do that ;____;)
One of the things I loved most was the way you told it. The switching between the present and the flashbacks to their past made this such an experience! The first flashback was actually so adorable! Determined, clingy Jongin and annoyed Joonmyun who gives in anyway. “So teach me now then
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"Have you been happy?" "Ah, y'know, I got by."This pretty much killed me. There are so many unsaid things in that little exchange alone. Jongin’s need to know what happened to Joonmyun, to hear why he had left him like that, if he suffered as much as he did. On the one hand he wants him to be happy, but on the other hand there had to be a part of him wishing that Joonmyun was as miserable as him, missing Jongin and cursing himself for leaving him like he did
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jenniiiiiiiiiii /rolls all over you/ as always, your heartfelt and eloquent comments give me so so much life. It means the world to me that this fic touched your heart bc it touches mine and I just want other people to feel it too. So thank you thank you thank you for feeling it and for understanding how much they mean to each other. Just /crawls into your lap and never leaves/ I love you lots, jenni. For everything. I think you know what that encompasses ;;;;
And yes, all the selu I ever write is always ever and ever for you <333
....this was beautiful! A wonderful slice of life piece and I really appreciate how you focused on first love and second chances♡ Their bodies are different but their hearts ... their hearts haven't changed at all.
/cries a river cause that sentence had my own heart beat faster!
You described Jongin's feelings so well. His longing, desperation and undying love for Junmyeon which he couldnt move on from. I really really enjoyed reading this a lot and I'd like to thank you for writing this♡
BARTENDER JUNMYEON BTW /FANS HERSELF
And I lol-ed so hard at Jongdae's text message reply to Jongin, gtfo chooty :'D
HTOS THSI O LOVED THIS SUKAI SOOSOSOSO MUCHHHHHHHHHHH THE BREATKUP BROKE MY HEART SO MUCH ;A;;A;A;A;A;;; BUTEHRN FINDING OUT ABOTU JOONMYUNS FAD IT AL L AMKES SENFSE BUT IT ALL STILL HURTS AND ACEHS So BYUTFOIULLL LIKE STRSLY WONDFERUL DESCRIOTIPONOG ADN JSUT EVEYRHTING I WIHS I COULD QUOT but lbr i'd quote the whole damn story orz orz it's jsut so ;A; but YAS HAPPY ENDINGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YAYAYAY sex on the beach ayyyy how romantic >u> and for his bday too hurhuruhur BUT OMF G HTE EMAILS ;A; HOW HE REPKEID TO EACH ONE ALL LATE /shakes fist at jm/ AND THE SELCA THING /cries harder I loved this thank you for the wonderful fic author nim /rolls away on a river of feels from fic
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ALSO I LIKE THE WAY YOU WRoTE THEM SO SO SOSOSOSOSOSOMUCH!!!!
Suho was a little shit for not answering omg !!!!
I like that suho didnt wait before making a move ! <3
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I don’t have the words (I’ll try to put my love for this into words anyway, but… watch me fail miserably orz)
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH I CAN’T EVEN… I CAN’T ENGLISH PROPERLY RIGHT NOW!
It’s true that I haven’t read a lot of stories in this exchange yet, but it’s by far (BY FAR) my favorite and it’d probably still be my favorite if I went ahead and read every single story in this exchange. I can safely say it’s one of the best Sukai stories I have ever read. As a matter of fact it’s one of the best stories I’ve read. Ever.
I JUST LOVE IT SO FREAKING MUCH! (We have guests, but here I am, trying to write you the comment this story deserves, but I honestly don’t know how I’m supposed to do that ;____;)
One of the things I loved most was the way you told it. The switching between the present and the flashbacks to their past made this such an experience!
The first flashback was actually so adorable! Determined, clingy Jongin and annoyed Joonmyun who gives in anyway.
“So teach me now then ( ... )
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"Ah, y'know, I got by."This pretty much killed me. There are so many unsaid things in that little exchange alone. Jongin’s need to know what happened to Joonmyun, to hear why he had left him like that, if he suffered as much as he did. On the one hand he wants him to be happy, but on the other hand there had to be a part of him wishing that Joonmyun was as miserable as him, missing Jongin and cursing himself for leaving him like he did ( ... )
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And yes, all the selu I ever write is always ever and ever for you <333
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how you focused on first love and second chances♡
Their bodies are different but their hearts ... their hearts haven't changed at all.
/cries a river cause that sentence had my own heart beat faster!
You described Jongin's feelings so well. His longing, desperation and undying love for Junmyeon which he couldnt move on from.
I really really enjoyed reading this a lot and I'd like to thank you for writing this♡
BARTENDER JUNMYEON BTW /FANS HERSELF
And I lol-ed so hard at Jongdae's text message reply to Jongin, gtfo chooty :'D
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I WIHS I COULD QUOT but lbr i'd quote the whole damn story orz orz it's jsut so ;A; but YAS HAPPY ENDINGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS YAYAYAY
sex on the beach ayyyy how romantic >u> and for his bday too hurhuruhur
BUT OMF G HTE EMAILS ;A; HOW HE REPKEID TO EACH ONE ALL LATE /shakes fist at jm/ AND THE SELCA THING /cries harder
I loved this thank you for the wonderful fic author nim /rolls away on a river of feels from fic
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