5 naked guys part III

[formerdinosaur]

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[fabulousnotion]

wI AM SITTING HERE SCREAMING WITH MY GF BECAUSE I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU WROTE THE ORGY FIC OMG JSFHLSJFs;fsdgfdsgsfdgfdgsdkhfjksdsgwuiorurowjf

i had no idea. no idea dude.

words cannot express the love i had for that fic.

i didn't think it was possible that i could like. love and adore you anymore.

OKAY WOW THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS FINE PIECE OF FANFICTION GOLD I"M SCREAMING. omg. dfskdfdsfdfgdfetierotert

wow. okay.

[formerdinosaur]

!!!!!!! I'm just so happy anyone liked this thing. I had fun trying to justify why this would ever happen, and just trying to make the dialogue funny. And I was super nervous posting this under my name, haha, so I'm glad for this comment, thank you. :)

[pocket]

i was gone all day today and was hoping i'd get lucky enough for an update from one of the authors i follow...i got lucky! this was new content for me since i actually didn't read this on the kink meme. i guess orgy fics aren't usually something that catch my eye, but i really enjoyed this one.

i particularly loved:
• stan's bathroom bronco mug, heh
• "the crown jewel, prudish Kyle" - yes. absolutely perfect.
• "'Butters, Marjorine, Professor, Mantequilla, Leopold. I love every fucking inch of you.'" - when the tears started.

i love these fics with this great brotherly love these boys have for each other. and "guardian" kenny too, looking out for all of them. i was really surprised by the ending! i was expecting a pretty violent finale, but trent forgiving them was more on par with the mood of the story. hooray for happy endings!

[formerdinosaur]

Well, I'm glad you found it! I'm not usually into porn with more than two people, but I wanted to see if I could somehow make this scenario ... work. It's kind of an alternate universe where Kyle would actually be willing to do any of this, haa, but yeah, he was the ~crown jewel~ for me writing this too, like, his justification for doing this had to be the most convincing or whatever.

Glad you enjoyed this one, and the happy ending! After all that porn I wanted to write a bunch of scenes of them just hugging ecstatically, heh.

[tmcala]

I think I cried a little bit. I definitely cried a little bit. This was beautiful in a way that an orgy fic usually cannot be. And so, as usual, I tip my hat to you. It was awesome and I loved it. Kenny, Kenny, Kenny. sigh. He's just so /good/. I loved that you included Butters in this, or rather that you could since he was included in the original storyline that this is based on or whatever. I'm rambling now. It was lovely. The end.

[formerdinosaur]

Thank you so much for reading and for letting me know! I wanted to try to do something with this that wasn't just nonstop sex -- while also honoring the spirit of the thing with the nonstop sex, ha. I love writing from Kenny's POV, especially when he's kind of analyzing the others and their relationships.

[floatingskyfish]

I adore most everything you write, but oddly this is what strikes a chord with me over your (still massively brilliant) longer stuff like Leave the Pieces. Your Kenny is fantastic, and here my heart really aches for him. Well done for writing something so filthy but gorgeous at the same time.

[formerdinosaur]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this -- thanks for letting me know! There was really no way to do this without having it from Kenny's POV -- I had a couple of old drafts with it from Stan's POV, I think, but they never got longer than a page or so. Thanks so much for reading.

[tmk_fics]

Oh my gosh this was PERFECT and so full of feelings and just absolutely wonderful. I am SO in love with this fic!

[formerdinosaur]

Thank you! The episode where they're dreading Trent's return is one of my favorites ever, and I knew I'd eventually write fic about them dreading his next return. Glad you enjoyed this! :)