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four_too_long

Dec 15, 2008 22:15

Title: "The guilty one is not he who commits the sin, but the one who causes the darkness" *
Characters: Adam Monroe, Hiro Nakamura
Verse: Any (Though intended for After Shanti)
Word Count: 857
Disclaimer: Written by me, characters owned by their creators, not for profit, you get the picture.

( It’s yet another quiet night, no crickets to stir the silence, only the wind caressing the dead branches. Adam’s not quite sure why he’s outside when the temperature in the negatives of Fahrenheit - he’s not even dressed properly - but something had drawn him outside. )

Comments 7

welcometo_life December 16 2008, 03:59:27 UTC

That was beautiful, hon.

four_too_long December 17 2008, 01:29:45 UTC

Thank you :D

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four_too_long December 17 2008, 01:31:35 UTC

Thank you, really. <3

Kensei is totally hugging Hiro right now, because Adam's being mean.

buzz_me December 16 2008, 05:05:48 UTC

That was seriously fantastic. Amazing glimpse into Adam's head - really, I'm kind of staggered.

four_too_long December 17 2008, 01:33:28 UTC

Thank you, and that means a lot~ <33

gotbottle December 16 2008, 06:22:14 UTC

Wow. That was amazing.

four_too_long December 17 2008, 01:35:05 UTC

Hee, thank you very much. Probably the only thing I've written recently I liked.