Comments | fourzoas: LJ Idol Season 9, Week 4: On Backs and Bending

fourzoas

LJ Idol Season 9, Week 4: On Backs and Bending

Apr 07, 2014 14:03

Nobody can ride your back if your back's not bent.--MLK

( It is no small thing to be one )

meme: lj idol

Comments 24

eska818 April 7 2014, 22:47:54 UTC

Beautiful.

fourzoas April 8 2014, 01:17:51 UTC

thank you.

similiesslip April 8 2014, 03:09:15 UTC

This is lovely. Such a wonderful new way to look at love and aging.

fourzoas April 8 2014, 14:45:58 UTC

Thank you!

kickthehobbit April 8 2014, 05:27:36 UTC

Lovely imagery with a nice flow-this is excellent.

fourzoas April 8 2014, 14:46:11 UTC

Thank you--I'm glad you enjoyed!

eternal_ot April 8 2014, 13:50:28 UTC

"There is the tissue and
there is the scar,
the one a rough reminder of
the making of the other" loved these lines...a nice take...aging!..well done!

fourzoas April 8 2014, 14:46:48 UTC

Thank you! I hadn't really thought about this poem as being about aging, per se, but I can see why that's what's coming across! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

faerie_spark April 8 2014, 15:02:19 UTC

Beautiful. You have a poetic voice.

fourzoas April 10 2014, 13:39:32 UTC

Thank you.