love is watching someone die

[foxlives]

so this is all introspective and shit, and i've been living with it for the past three weeks and so all objectivity has been lost, it could suck balls for all i can tell.

also, decimals don't work like that. but whatever.

( originally posted over at sharp_teeth, for the prompt, Dean doesn't tell Sam about his deal.)
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sam and dean, 4000 words
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Comments

[foxlives]

dude! it's been a perverse sort of goal of mine to make someone cry, so thanks for that and for the lovely comment.

[deangirl1]

Loved this. Fabulous pacing and I love the sparse style of the writing. I could have totally seen Dean not telling Sam....

[foxlives]

the pacing was a bitch on this one, glad it worked for you. thanks!

[dristi2u]

wow! this story was so sad and amazing!

[this came to my mind reading the last sentence: "Love is watching someone live, while you die with a smile."]

[foxlives]

SHIT, that quote is fantastic. perfectly sums up this story, too.

thank you!

[monicawoe]

Oh this was just beautifully painful. Well done!

Poor boys.

[foxlives]

poor boys, indeed. thanks!

[maypoles]

This was fantastic. I don't know what else to say about it, except that it got to me, emotionally, in a way few fics do. <3

[foxlives]

highest praise, right there. thank you much.

[maypoles]

I totally just read this again. ;) And I've recced it here at hoodie_time, fyi.

[foxlives]

ah! thank you so much, means a lot.