love is watching someone die

Apr 21, 2011 00:07


so this is all introspective and shit, and i've been living with it for the past three weeks and so all objectivity has been lost, it could suck balls for all i can tell.

also, decimals don't work like that. but whatever.

( originally posted over at sharp_teeth, for the prompt, Dean doesn't tell Sam about his deal.)
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nitro26 April 21 2011, 20:34:45 UTC
The progression of this whole story from beginning to end is incredible. There's certainly a point somewhere where the panic button's finally pushed and everything else just escalates from there. And oh god, those last few paragraphs. Those really got to me. Really wonderful work.

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foxlives April 25 2011, 04:06:03 UTC
infinite thanks, dude. excellent comment, thank you very much.

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foxlives April 25 2011, 04:06:53 UTC
dude! DUDE! honored like whoa over here.

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minchout April 22 2011, 13:30:53 UTC
This was really lovely and sad. Perfect.

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foxlives April 25 2011, 04:07:28 UTC
thank you very much.

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big_heart_june April 22 2011, 14:41:53 UTC
omg. I'm in awe of this....it's beautiful and raw and so terribly terribly sad. I can see Dean not telling....oh man, Sammy...
you're awesome, this totally blew me away.

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foxlives April 25 2011, 04:08:43 UTC
excellent, glad to hear. thank you!

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amonitrate April 22 2011, 23:18:04 UTC
Oh god, ouch.

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foxlives April 25 2011, 04:09:15 UTC
thanks, dude.

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