Comments | fraggledragon: Red Sky At Night (Part 4)

fraggledragon

Red Sky At Night (Part 4)

Aug 02, 2011 19:22

It's a long time dark, John thought as he lay in dark limbo unable to move, barely even breathing.

Is this death? he wondered, Am I dead?He could not hear a thing, and even though he was sure his eyes were open, he could see nothing. His body seemed to be held in nothingness. It was as if he was floating on an air current, though he felt no ( Read more... )

Comments 18

el_spirito23 August 3 2011, 00:56:14 UTC

Aww, thanks for writing this! I really liked the team dynamic here, and you had lovely Sheppard-whump. Great cover art too!

fraggledragon August 3 2011, 09:53:12 UTC

Ahh thankee, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I hope it covered all that you wanted :D

kriadydragon August 3 2011, 03:01:14 UTC

Just lovely. Wonderfully intense, great OCs, and great friendship :D

fraggledragon August 3 2011, 09:53:37 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! :D

titan5 August 3 2011, 04:22:00 UTC

Great world you've created, with some interesting wildlife. Loved the building tension with the increasing danger and John getting closer to death. Poor Rodney having to work against that kind of DEADline (no pun intended).

fraggledragon August 3 2011, 09:55:37 UTC

Heh heh! Rodney will get his reward coffee when he arrives home, for all his hard work ;) Thank you, glad you liked it!

linzi5 August 6 2011, 20:53:55 UTC

I really enjoyed this story. I particularly enjoyed the world you created here. The wildlife was interesting, to say the least! I liked the OC's and loved the way you wrote the team - sigh.. . I found this to be a riveting and intense story, and I just adored the end where Teyla sense John wanted his team near him and that he didn't want to be left alone. Great writing! Thanks so much for sharing :)

fraggledragon August 6 2011, 21:40:24 UTC

Awww Thank you! I am really glad you enjoyed it! I love the team, wish we could still see them on our screens. :( But reading and writing stories of them, keeps their magic alive in my heart :D
I think I have read half the stories for the exchange so far, need to get on with reading the rest :D So good!

sherry57 August 18 2011, 08:58:26 UTC

Wow, what a story! I didn't realise I was holding my breath until I got to the end!! Excellent whump, excellent team worry and work, excellent story...thanks hon!!

fraggledragon August 18 2011, 13:23:15 UTC

Awwww thank you!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Appreciate the comment!