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Prologue

Jan 08, 2013 22:05

Fragile Essence
Prologue
Author: Aquariuslover
Beta: tahoeturquoise

Summary: Jaejoong, the half Korean child nobody wanted, and Yunho, the beloved golden son of a town, form an unlikely bond; one that is forever evolving through the passing years as it is repeatedly tested by love, loss, and fire. This is part one of their story.

Author’s Note: This story is ( Read more... )

Comments 26

chloe1910 January 10 2013, 05:09:06 UTC

OMG! T_T What did Yunho and Jaejoong do? I don't think they literally killed Yunho's father right? But I guess the fire was started because of them? Did they have an argument? Yunho's mother went into early labour and died from the labour and shock from the news of her husband in the hospital is it? T_T

Oh god, just the prologue but so angsty T_________T Aquarius ah, what are you trying to do to Yunjae and us =.=

aquariuslover January 10 2013, 17:10:05 UTC

It is very angsty...this is very angsty---but it has happy moments. lol

Some people seem to like it. lol

dione_8 January 28 2013, 22:25:02 UTC

Beautiful prolog :)
But still make me confuse >

bonamanila February 7 2013, 19:58:41 UTC

Oh my gosh! Such an interesting way to start a story, and so emotional! I'll go read the next part right now!

PS. Remember me? I always end up having these random breaks from reading fanfics but I never forget your stories! I really have missed them, and I'm so excited to find that you've started another one! Yay! :D

bonamanila February 7 2013, 20:00:01 UTC

Oh right - I'm obviously joining this community! :D

moon1084 February 23 2013, 03:31:01 UTC

Hello there! I was recommended to read this fic by my better half fi_chan And she did warn me but OMFG! I'm going to kill her because her warning was not even close to preparing me. My heart is already pounding and I don't even know what to do.

I'm going to assume they didn't literally kill YunHo's parents. Why is YunHo taking it out on JaeJoong? Were they caught with each other by parents that caused the accident? OMG! My heart! *pops open my wine bottle*

Forgive me if my comments are not worthy or are lackluster because one, your fic is the first fic I'm starting in a very very long time (almost a yr+) and two, your writing if I remember from Damaged (which I didn't have the heart to finish) was just so beautiful and intense. Only a few writers have ever been able to get such raw emotions out of me so it's hard to for me to read it continuously. I have to often take breaks if I'm really effected by a fic. Anyways, here I go. And do let me know if I need to stop leaving my long or annoying comments.

lilyjung_aktf March 1 2013, 09:58:39 UTC

beautiful but angsty prologue. just starting to read this beautiful story. i gotta go to next chapt! XD