On the day of judgment all are inscribed

Sep 23, 2011 07:57

No electricity and limited internet, so a microfic for ar_drabbles challenge 78, more books.

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you have to take them in context )

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akachankami September 23 2011, 05:21:11 UTC
(*o*) so short and so keen
There's something solid about Commander Adama. ♥
He writes in leather bound books, his name on the cover in gold.
Cain takes his logs and all of Laura's hope ;_;
i love the idea of them writing in different supports as statement of their purpose: he had to do it anyway, she has to do with what she's got. then cain... *sigh*

is speedy writing at candle light? *pets speedy* still so efficient and ready =D thank you ♥

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frakcancer September 25 2011, 17:44:05 UTC
is speedy writing at candle light?

Close. On a smartphone. Ever try committing fanfic with Swype?

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bugsfic September 23 2011, 06:25:04 UTC
Sometimes 100 words are just enough. They are their books. She's assembled her new life from scraps, he's hard-bound.

And of course Laura would note the emasculating action of taking his books away.

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bsg_aussiegirl September 23 2011, 07:00:53 UTC
Well, it was only 50...

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bugsfic September 23 2011, 07:16:52 UTC
*cold buggy stare*

Well it feels like 100. So there.

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frakcancer September 25 2011, 17:44:38 UTC
She just liked it so much she read it twice. :-)

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bsg_aussiegirl September 23 2011, 07:03:10 UTC
We all love to think of Bill as meticulous with his logs, even though they end up getting him in such trouble with Cain. That last line is a killer!

:( for no electricity and limited internet.

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frakcancer September 25 2011, 17:48:20 UTC
We all love to think of Bill as meticulous with his logs

My mind is going all sorts of interesting places with that line.

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fragrantwoods September 23 2011, 12:11:12 UTC
Damn. That sums up so much about them and their trajectories (and their commonalities) in a couplefew sentences.
And their relationship, in that last.
Hope the electricity and internet recover fast! Awful feeling, I know.

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frakcancer September 25 2011, 17:49:44 UTC
That's what I love about microfic -- the need to make every letter count for something.

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lindy999 September 23 2011, 14:09:15 UTC
pretty much says it all for that part...

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frakcancer September 25 2011, 17:50:02 UTC
In a good way, I hope.

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lindy999 September 25 2011, 22:01:03 UTC
Yes :)

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