Comments | fraser_vecchio: For Nakeisha: "Four TImes Ray Almost Proposed to Benny, and One Time He Did

pixiecatfish in fraser_vecchio

For Nakeisha: "Four TImes Ray Almost Proposed to Benny, and One Time He Did

Apr 01, 2008 18:42

Title: Four Times Ray Almost Proposed to Benny, and One Tme He Did
Author: Pixiecatfish
Recipient: nakeisha
Pairing & Rating: Fraser/Vecchio, R
Word count: 1,860
Summary: The best laid plans...
Disclaimer: I don't own them, but I love them.
Author's Notes: I have been wanting to write a "5 Times" story for a while now, and this gave me an excellent chance to do so ( Read more... )

Comments 18

snoopypez April 2 2008, 01:26:40 UTC

I love that, for them, the perfect time for that is during an everyday thing like a stakeout. Love that. :D

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 00:54:06 UTC

Thank you! It did seem appropriate for them.

r_vecchio April 2 2008, 01:37:46 UTC

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 x 1000000

Totally. I adore the dialogue especially!

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 00:55:31 UTC

Thank you!!

bradygirl_12 April 2 2008, 01:53:34 UTC

Wonderful work, Pixie!

The romantic settings were all great, but unfortunately, all ruined! :)

And a stake-out just seems so appropriate for these two for the proposal. :)

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 00:57:09 UTC

Thank you bradygirl! I'm glad you liked it.

belmanoir April 2 2008, 04:38:26 UTC

Awwwww!

Benny turned to look at him. "But Ray, I thought you wanted to go out for a nice dinner."

"Like you wouldn't believe," Ray said.

Ray is so adorable! And Fraser would be SO HAPPY if Ray proposed to him. Awwwwwww.

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 00:58:42 UTC

Ray is so adorable!

Isn't he though?

Thanks for commenting!

aingeal8c April 2 2008, 10:07:13 UTC

Echoing the awwwwwws.

The best laid plans of Ray Vecchio. Poor Ray.

But awwwwwww.

pixiecatfish April 3 2008, 01:00:10 UTC

Thank you! Your awwwws made me happy.

I really enjoyed the ficathon, and I'm looking forward to the next one.