Comments | freefalling85: Fic: I'll ask again

freefalling85

Fic: I'll ask again

Mar 30, 2007 13:44

Disclaimer: Usual stuff, I don't own, nor claim to own anything to do with Life on Mars. That honour goes to the people at Kudos and The BBC.
Rating: Two swear words and no violence, so I'll say it's a PG.
Pairing: None actually, a first for me!
Summary: You can ask all the questions you like, sometimes you're just not going to get the answers.
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gen, life on mars, fic

Comments 19

cathryn17 March 30 2007, 13:23:02 UTC

OK that I was not expecting. lol. I loved how you didn't mention what year it was or who the other characters were. Real head messer that.

freefalling85 March 30 2007, 13:31:35 UTC

Hehe :D

Yay! I had a horrible thought mid way through reading it after I posted it, that it was blatantly obvious what was actually going on, but YAY!

Thanks! I wanted a bit of a "what?!" factor at the end of it it :^)

Glad you liked it, thanks for commenting :)

xxdettiexx March 30 2007, 13:43:27 UTC

I really liked that!
Didn't see the ending coming! Thought there might be something more to it than it seemed, (Most LOM fics seem to!) but I didn't think that would be it! Definite surprise at the end!
Very good! x

freefalling85 March 30 2007, 13:57:25 UTC

*squee*

Thank you! :D

And yeah, you're right - most LoM fics do seem to have more to them than meets the eye! :P

Hehe *bounces* :oD

t_a_n_g_o March 30 2007, 14:52:31 UTC

Great work! makes me even more excited for next week!

freefalling85 March 30 2007, 23:58:57 UTC

I know! Eeee!

Tuesdays are gonna suck from two weeks' time. :^(.

space_oddity_75 March 30 2007, 15:03:58 UTC

Oh, nice idea! And very well written too!

It took me a while to realise in which period the story was set, but in the end it all became clear. Oh, and the idea that it might have been Hunt to drive the car that ran over Sam is very intriguing! Well done! :)))

freefalling85 March 31 2007, 00:00:08 UTC

Thank you :D

Mmm, cool - 'cause I wanted it to be a bit "wtf?!" at the end but I'm pleased that it became clear too :D

Hmm, I don't really know where the theory came from actually, but I've posted a full version of it on my journal somewhere lol. I think it's two posts <- that <- way lol.

bistokids March 30 2007, 16:01:16 UTC

Lovely, intriguing work! I liked the fact that Alan Skelton turned out to be the kind of copper that Sam was trying to make Chris into. And Gene driving the car - God I hope not! (I'm starting to be a bit scared by the possibilities actually).

freefalling85 March 31 2007, 00:01:22 UTC

YAY!

And yeah, I liked the way my brain wrote him lol. I can imagine Chris being a good dad and leading his kids into the force as good coppers actually :)

Hmm, and as for Gene driving the car... oooh it's a scary possibility isn't it? the fact that it's a possibility at all is a bit >:^O!< in itself lol.