Morning Glow -- [ Tora/Hiroto - Fanfiction ]

Sep 16, 2008 21:41

Title: Morning Glow
Author: Aki freekshxt
Pairing: Tora/Hiroto
Rating: R-15
Genre: Angst/Death/Drama
Comments: Inspired by FFX2 song "Morning Glow"
Disclaimer: I do not own alice nine., or anybody in the band.

Pon, how can you promise forever? )

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govi_chan November 15 2008, 16:29:36 UTC
definitely best torapon fikkus i read!
it made me all emotional and on the verge of crying....
thank you so much for writing this! ♥

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mana06 December 3 2008, 07:42:28 UTC
great job. ^_^

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chaotic_concept October 11 2009, 11:47:12 UTC
oh god this was beautiful
i loved it
though it made me cry like a baby
-claps-
;-; i love your writing
-adds to memories-

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hidekuro January 10 2010, 23:30:42 UTC
... wow. not the thing I was looking for when I typed "toraxhiroto" on google xD
really. I read "sad" and "angst" but really wasn't expecting something that made me want to cry. it has been long since I wanted to cry while reading a fic and as I type this my eyes are all blurry.
I love every single word you wrote and my fav sentence might be "Because, Pon's statistics say it's possible. Just as long as you always have a good heart, and believe in forever." it made me smile a lot.
The beginning was a tad of predictable to me, a lot of angst fics start like that, but few actually can make us sink in the feelings of the protagonist and you did it very well. Towards the ending, I was actually thinking how the fic would finish and it surprised me a lot. I never thought Tora would overcome Hiroto's death, since he was so immersed in him. It took me by surprise Tora's atitude of taking Hiroto's death only physically, thinking how Hiroto would like him to continue living a normal life and it was that that almost made me cry. almost. xD

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