My Lovenote has Gone Flat: Arc One (2/4)

[freiheit_0308]

Title: My Lovenote has Gone Flat: Arc One (2/4)
Author: freiheit_0308
Wordcount: around 1400
Pairing(s): Frank/Gerard, Ray/Mikey
Warning(s): Underaged Gee drinking
Notes: This is dedicated to everyone who reviewed cause it made me want to get this out now! I know the first few chapters are kind of short, but I want to set up a premise with some

Comments

[zeropercent]

Aw Frankie. And innocent!Gee. BE STILL, MY HEART. This is so lovely, egirjhgoiuhjg why can I not form a proper comment I don't understand

[freiheit_0308]

=D <3

[freiheit_0308]

=D I think Gee's tummy did too

[draconic_girl]

Gee drawing Frankie... always awesome... <3
And I loved the moment when Frank asked "You really find me that fascinating?" *hearts in like EVERYONE's eyes* Of course he does :D

Great update! Looking forward to the next one :)

[freiheit_0308]

Aw! Thank you! I'm writing right now, so hopefully I'll have the next part out soon!

[pr_scatterbrain]

This is such an interesting premise. By altering Gerard's age, all the power dynamics usually found in the pairing are also completely altered. Gerard is vulnerable in a completely different way around Frank - he really doesn't know what he's doing. And Frank? There is something so facinating about the way you're writing him. He is both the same, yet different. The same thing could be said about Mikey and Ray. It's all so facinating the way everything is different just because of one tiny change.

I'm really interested to see where you take this and what you decide to explore in this.

[freiheit_0308]

Thank you very much for this review. I attempted to do as much research as possible to make sure that the characters are as close as possible to themselves but also keep them genuine to my story.

I've wanted to find a story in which Gerard was younger because I find age differences fascinating, and the one between Frank and Gerard is done amazingly in the few stories I've found, so I wanted to try that in the reverse.

<3 <3 <3 <3

[mcrforeverbby]

Love it !!!

awwwwwwwh.. adorable story so faaaaar !!!!!

they are shhhhooooooooooo cuuuuuute !! <3 <3 <3

i cant think of anything else to say.. im speechless =] (in a good way of course)

cant wait for the rest of the story !!

good luck !!

update soon pwetty pweaaaase ? ^.^

Re: <3 <3 <3 <3

[freiheit_0308]

Thank you!!

And I shall try to update as soon as I can!!