SMASHING GLASS BRIDGES//HAEHYUK

Aug 02, 2009 15:22

Title: SMASHING GLASS BRIDGES
Pairing: DONGHAE/EUNHYUK
Rating: R
Summary: MAYBE THEY DIDN'T UNDERSTAND EACH OTHER AS WELL AS THEY THOUGHT.

Hyukjae liked the angry break-ups the best. The worse the break-up, the harder Donghae fucked him. )

character: donghae, character: eunhyuk

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fictional_shade August 3 2009, 00:20:37 UTC
*gets emo and cry*

;o;

Damn, I love you <3.

and I hate you too because, damn, you can't do this to them, not to Hyuk, and wtf with that Donghae asshole ;o;. Still like it tho.

Write more.

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freshandhot August 4 2009, 02:22:11 UTC
lol, it's a love-hate relationship i see. <3

I'm writing, I'm writing. :]

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strawberryxuyu August 3 2009, 00:34:20 UTC
*cries* DDDDDDDD: poor Eunhyuk *pets him*

This is really good! i like that you seperated this like.. in stages kinda :D

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freshandhot August 4 2009, 02:23:39 UTC
oh god, i'm incapable of writing chapter fics so when i get a huge-ass ideas, i always write it like this.

(oh, and i just started reading why i like you and a;sldfj;alksdfkkkk, i'm feeling it so far)

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inuvampy August 3 2009, 01:24:24 UTC
Omg.

This was written amazingly... *is in awe*

The whole story is so heartbreaking though D: I feel so bad for Eunhyuk, but he can't help it when it's Donghae...

And Donghae... at first I thought he was cycling though girls just so he could break up with them to have a reason to mess with Eunhyuk, but now I don't even know Dx

Ugh the ending... *cuddles Eunhyuk to her bosom and slaps Donghae*

Once again, good job Dx! You must write more! Your style is beautiful! I love it ♥

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freshandhot August 4 2009, 02:33:39 UTC
(excuse me while i flail and squee for several minutes because of your comment. omg, you like my style, eee.)

i'm writing a companion piece to this, which is from donghae's pov, so that'll clear up a crapload of things on donghae's part. :|

but thankyouthankyou for a long comment :] those are the best.

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inuvampy August 4 2009, 05:32:32 UTC
xDDD *tackles* I don't think the comment was that long 8D But I'm glad it made youhappy ♥ ♥ ♥ And your style is soooo beautiful~ No joke ♥

I can't wait for the companion piece~ I really wan't to know whats going on in his mind :\ It won't end happy will it ):? *weeps bitter tears*

Kekeke You are welcome ♥ Comments are love!

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papermonkeys August 3 2009, 01:27:36 UTC
grahhhh donghae you jerk.
hyuk why are you so stupid and selfless to let hae use you time and time again?!
i like. i like how you wrote this.

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freshandhot August 4 2009, 02:36:01 UTC
hyuk thinks he's being a good friend. ]:
thank you tho, for commenting and liking.

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krnqt96 August 3 2009, 01:40:45 UTC
i just cried....
this is heartbreaking...
could u maybe write a happy ending? so i don't die a little on the inside *puppy eyes

overall great fic
keep it up! (maybe a bit happier....)

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freshandhot August 4 2009, 02:38:17 UTC
aww, don't cry. ]:

i'm not writing a happy ending, but i AM writing a companion piece told from donghae's pov, which will definitely have a lighter ending.

also, i normally don't write angsty stuff like this. i usually write fluff stuff so expect more of that!

thank you for reading. :)

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krnqt96 August 4 2009, 15:39:36 UTC
YAYY
i was gonna suggest that next ^^
will the ending continue on after in donghae's pov?
or is it just gonna be this exact same story?

i love your writing ^^

i'll be waiting!!

eunhae ftw!

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freshandhot August 4 2009, 17:03:27 UTC
the ending of donghae's pov will definitely continue after hyuk's, but the beginning will be the same story, just different scenes. :)

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