Title: Catch me
Rating: G
Pairings(s): Kris/OC
Genre: Slice of Life/Kind of Romance but not really.
A/N: Maybe a prequel to
this? I dunno ;u; Hope you enjoy! Constructive criticism and comments welcomed in the comments!
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“Yeah.” She looked up and saw him smile. The warmth of his hand felt all too real, and for the first time she thought that maybe, just maybe, her friends were right, that she had a crush on Kris. )
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I was just looking a your age. You ship ChenLay. I love you. ♥♥
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But yeah. Sometimes oc fics sound too much like crazy dreams xD but I try to not do tht :P
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First off, let me say that I love that you did an OC pairing.
I also like that you didn't go in-depth describing how they felt about one another, but you could definitely sense it.
Can't wait for your next writing :)
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I'm also very happy that the mood I was trying to set came across to you. I wasn't sure if I did a good job.
Thanks you for reading my fics. Really. It means a lot. I hope I will have another one up soon! I'll try my best to be write more frequently!
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