atavism: nostalgia for the past

[frostopia]

block the voices out. the audible nothing that imprisons me in this room in the form of need-to-know information in a supposedly easy and convenient form of viewing for my tired eyes and weary spirit merely waiting for an end, that notorious time in bold that screams 10:45am and maybe just a little more.

see also: rambling in the form of

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Burt's bees

[chuckpredator]

Moving from place to place and creating a new face. Almost different from the last one you had before, but still holding on to the old features. Getting a new pet to be your slave draining it of it's innocence. Not satisfied yet and growing tired of this thing. Changing again getting a new face and getting a new pet. Trying desperately to fill up, this void, this blank piece, but not wanting to. Contradiction in everything that is and what could've been.

Re: Burt's bees

[frostopia]

slave? burt's bees? do i smell honey?

mmm

[anonymous]

see also: desire in the form of nice, soft, plump mountains with caramel strawberry peaks.

Re: mmm

[frostopia]

omg. lol.

beautiful

[richie_law]

that sounds like some awesome spoken word...have you ever thought about going to an open mike?

Re: beautiful

[frostopia]

not really.. i think i would be too nervous to ever recite what i write out loud to other people. and usually what i write is just ramblings when i'm bored in class, inebriated or emotional.

thanks for the compliment, tho. =)

Re: beautiful

[richie_law]

really? cause i have a lot of friends who do spoken word. and that piece has a very natural rythym to it. not quite iambic pentameter ;) but still, it flows so smoothly...

i understand about the writing in class/inebriated/or emotional. everytime i get emotional i end up writing and posting it to poetry.com. heh...still havent bought that 'anthology' from those fuckers...

Re: beautiful

[frostopia]

iambic pentameter? err, definition?

i think i posted a poem or two on poetry.com, although what i've posted is crappy. i guess i just like writing in my online sites.. less pressure and the ranting feels good.

[buckwilder]

I like this, and I'm not so sure why...

[frostopia]

thanks. it started off with me trying to pass the time in class and then it just sort of branched off into more personal stuff towards the end. which usually happens when i write. it's never consistent, usually incoherent, and always cryptic. either way, it's the first sober thing i've written in a while.