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eurowatch June 23 2015, 11:38:47 UTC
You know AJ, I would not be surprised if all those badass fighters trained in ballet or just dancing in general at some point. Ballet helps build strenght, flexebility and Grace, Things you are going to need for all the training a Hunter is going to do, along with skills like sewing, knitting, cooking, cleaning Your own clothes and pedicure.
Really, I would love for someone to Write a spitefic of MACHO AJ realising the many girly Things he is expected to do now as part of his training.

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beacon80 June 25 2015, 21:14:43 UTC
Still don't know why Ozpin lets you get away with not wearing the uniform.
Why does he? Seriously, why bring this up if you're not going to explain it. It's not like we'd even really know that he didn't wear the uniform if you hadn't just told us.

I just never learned how to dance, never tried to learn how.
Oh, shut up. We all know if you actually decided to, you'd be amazing at it.

Why would a girl ask a guy to the dance? Isn't it usually guys that ask?
Relient K even wrote a song called Sadie Hawkins. Also, while she does call it "unorthodox", Weiss asks Neptune out, so it's not exactly unheard of.

AJ panicked for a moment.
I'm not sure why he's panicking. Does he actually not remember the name of his school? If so, why isn't he more worried about these gaps in his memory? If not, why doesn't he want to tell Blake? Unless he went to St Brutus's Secure Centre for Incurably Criminal Boys, it's not like the name is going to mean anything to her.

How are youthough? In an actual suit?
Why is he in a suit? In canon, when he actually ( ... )

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talonicefire June 26 2015, 11:51:44 UTC
"I'll wear the school uniform then if you wish."

Why bother? No one else in the fic wears the uniform.

"I feel bad now not dancing with you." AJ said sadly.

Actually, you should really be feeling bad how you flipped your shit over something as stupid as being unable to dance. But of course, can't have you feeling bad for beating someone up now, can we?

"I feel bad now not dancing with you." AJ said sadly.

Ozpin used his extra special stash just to make that =D

Why they’re reading RWBY fanfic if they haven’t watched the thing, I don’t know why, but it could happen.

While I doubt it's possible for this Stuthor, but for other writers on the site who write fics for multiple fandoms, they could gather followers that will look at all of their fics. In this case, you could get someone who loves your work but doesn't know the series you're writing a fanfic of in your new fic, yet they'll read it despite that.

seeing the look on your face when you drank the punchBetting he pissed in it. Had to mark his territory someway ( ... )

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eurowatch June 26 2015, 12:08:09 UTC
*Why bother? No one else in the fic wears the uniform.*

Actually, if we are following canon (which this fic is slavishly doing) everybody should be wearing their School uniform during lessons. I was actually assuming that Boy to was wearing it untill he revealed that he wasn't. Which begs the questions of why he isn't wearing it and nobody commented on it before.
Seriously, these kind of details should have been revealed at the beginning instead of almost at the ending.

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talonicefire June 26 2015, 13:41:59 UTC
True, but I was thinking more of how I can't recall a single instance where he mentions the uniforms. So as far as I could tell from the fic, no one had to wear a uniform.

But you're right, these are all details that should be addressed early on. Too bad this Stuthor doesn't believe in giving us all the information when it would be important to bring it up, and waits chapters later to bring it up as an after thought.

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