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Mar 20, 2005 23:00

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call me. salparadise87 March 21 2005, 06:19:22 UTC
call me, or im me, or talk to me on tuesday about your poetry.

"I am a counterfeit man
walking among counterfeit men
drowning my reflections
on the dry riverbank"

the less you sound like bukowski, the harder it hits.
or maybe...the moments that you get at, what buke was kinda gettin at, it hits?

lets talk.

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Re: call me. funnykid593 March 22 2005, 01:17:29 UTC
We shall talk soon. I'd love to do it now, but unfortunately I, like the rest of our class, am scrambling to finish up my Minchener term paper. So, tomorrow sounds great to me.

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anonymous March 21 2005, 07:16:46 UTC
"and someone I love will someday
love me in the same way

I will find someone to share
my life and my bed with
not just either/or"

and until then u have me!!can i the the "either" (i dont like being the "or" anymore its too frustrating!!!! long conversations....walks by the bay... candlelit dinners lol ...ok i guess not but we do alwasy have our "half-iversairy... which by the way is coming up ....hope u remember it ....
<3 ~Rachelle~

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correction anonymous March 21 2005, 07:19:56 UTC
i meant *can i be the "either"

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Re: correction funnykid593 March 22 2005, 01:00:31 UTC
lol Well which do you want to share then, my life or my bed? As a great man once told me, "the worst decision is indecision." :-P

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tahiti_tati March 21 2005, 09:07:30 UTC
"I will find someone to share
my life and my bed with
not just either/or"

yep... that one hit too.

you know what I love about your writing? It just feels so damn real. No sugar coating, no exaggerating... it's honesty in its most vulnerable and delicate state... but that's not to say it isn't sweetly beautiful, either. It's just that, when you write something pretty, I actually believe it.

anyway, before I babble on, nite. And thanks :)

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funnykid593 March 22 2005, 01:15:37 UTC
:-D Thank you, mon petit belle - your comment made me smile one of those silly, sheepish grins that make me feel embarrassed because I can't control them. Unfortunately, I don't seem to be able to adequately express my sincere gratitude and - aw, fuck it - what you said means a lot to me, and I just want you to know that. What you complimented my writing on is what I strive for as a writer, so your compliment really hit close to the heart (a popular saying around these parts, from what I gather ;-D). Well, before I babble on myself (I fear this move may have come a bit late), I'll cut off the comment here. We'll talk soon - I hope you're doing well.

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anonymous March 23 2005, 00:25:11 UTC
My friend, fear is sometimes a hard thing to face, but sometimes it is a battle that we must fight, and though we may not emerge unscathed, we must continue to fight for what we believe is right even if we risk our views being marred by the masses. And trust me you will find someone to share your "life and bed" with, and most certainly not "either/or".

And if you can figure out who wrote this, a great smile will emerge in admiration of your detective skills.

In essence remember that we are all the same, "We laugh, We Cry, We Worship, We Die"

-Your Friend ________(fill in the blank)

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