Comments | funnykid593: Show me heaven.

funnykid593

Show me heaven.

Apr 13, 2005 23:58

I'm too tired to lie. I'm too ( Read more... )

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backwardsriver April 14 2005, 15:32:42 UTC

this set reminds me a lot of ginsberg and the general beat movement. it is absolutly wonderful

funnykid593 April 15 2005, 03:20:54 UTC

:) I've definitely been reading a lot of beat poetry lately, which would account for its influence on my writing. Thank you for the compliment; I'm glad that you enjoyed reading my entry.

mormon_princess April 14 2005, 17:04:58 UTC

little girl, come sing to me
those songs of sweetest melody
as we sit and stare endlessly
at the cool, crushing sea

I'll sing to you!

I love your entry. ^_^

By the way...guess who can sing just like Sarah Brightman as "Christine" in Phantom...yep. ME! ^_~

Love ya!
*~Marlene*~*

tahiti_tati April 14 2005, 18:05:36 UTC

damnit ive been trying to write about a gypsy for like 2 months,and i have this incredible image but no ability to put it into words yet. I hate you.

lol, no really, I hate you because I loved it :)
Hopefully I'll find my own muse soon so I can spit it out ;)

funnykid593 April 15 2005, 03:10:14 UTC

:) I've always had a thing for gypsies. And, I'm glad that you enjoyed my entry; I hope that your muse stops hiding soon and sets your gypsy free.

dady ooooooooo salparadise87 April 14 2005, 21:36:24 UTC

HOLY SHIT!
kall me sally and kick me silly, darling you've got a bit of it.
i thought i wouldve felt jelous,
but i've got a big smile on my face.

keep singing about the gypsy, keep starting your poems off from between her thighs or in the pupils of her eyes, cuz honestly, that's been your best damn shot at it yet.

Re: dady ooooooooo funnykid593 April 15 2005, 03:19:35 UTC

lol Thanks for the input, friend. I'll keep singing about the gypsy, and solemnly swear that I'll spend as much time in her eyes and between her thighs as she'll allow me. Now, you go write something powerful for Cafe Night - I need all the good material I can get.

debsterz April 15 2005, 01:26:42 UTC

Well, I for one loved it. I'm a fan now!
And hopefully your muse will be around for a while :)

funnykid593 April 15 2005, 03:12:38 UTC

:) Well, it's nice to have a fan. Do you want to starty a club? You could be it's president, you know, if you get enough votes and all that. :-P

And, yeah, I think my muse is gonna stick around for a while. :)