Comments | funshade: i don't wanna put a subject buddy!

funshade

i don't wanna put a subject buddy!

Oct 03, 2005 17:57

Well i have my hard copy story to Danny... and apparently he is hating the fact that it is sooo grammatically faulted... Well Danny NO DUH! its in script prompt i don't care to take the resources of my brain (witch i don't have) to put it into perfect unscratched form! that's why i have been bugging you for the past 3 weeks to check it so you can ( Read more... )

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dannydude October 3 2005, 23:18:18 UTC

Well, some stuff I can understand (such as your vs you're and their vs there vs they're and were vs where vs we're, etc.), but some of it makes no sense at all. I don't have the hard copy in front of me right now, so I can't provide any specific examples.

hugemongness? WTF? Did you make that up on purpose or did you want "humongous"?

Yes i DID make it up funshade October 4 2005, 00:18:55 UTC

I know the gramatics are all out of wack but what do you think about the story itself?

Re: Yes i DID make it up dannydude October 4 2005, 00:23:05 UTC

I haven't gotten that far yet. I've just proofread up to about the 2nd or 3rd page, and that's just from what little I got done during the day. I don't have time to look at it now, and I probably shouldn't be spending time typing this entry. Oh well.

I know this is your live journal and all.. _thescholar_ October 5 2005, 12:23:28 UTC

But I demand that you change the color scheme. It truely is horrid.

Re: I know this is your live journal and all.. funshade October 6 2005, 01:54:51 UTC

ya trust me i will chage it i just need to find a good color schem of purple (my fav color)

WHOBAJABAWHAT?! funshade October 6 2005, 02:18:49 UTC

Oh ya one more thing... Do i know you?

anonymous October 6 2005, 00:56:54 UTC

Hey Austin!
~mandy

chesapeake89 October 6 2005, 00:57:06 UTC

Hey Austin!
~mandy