what a catch

[futurebruises]

pairing: krischen
rating: nc-17
warning: catboy!au, mentions of bondage
genre: smut
length: ~3100 words, oneshot
summary: unabashed bachelor jongdae forgets he ordered a catboy off the internet, and the catboy he gets almost makes him wish he hadn't. keyword almost.
prompt: here
note: it is very very early in the morning and i'm on spring break!!

Comments

[burningleaf]

you filled this prompt! i liked it, overall, except some pacing is off and it kinda retracts from me enjoying it? and the heat should've gone longer hahahaha sorrynotsorry and grumpy!kris is just the cutest lol

[futurebruises]

ah thanks for reading! i really wasn't sure on the length of the heat but it was like 4 am and my research wasn't really going anywhere lol so thank you for confirming my suspicions i will fix that and i kind of abandoned the whole thing for a week bc exams and i picked it up again last night so that should account for the pacing OTL i'll reread it and fix it up later today. thanks so much for the feedback!

[burningleaf]

haha yeah you mentioned-- isn't the early crack of the morning the most effective time to write fics XD holler when you're done fixing those little things, bc i wanna read it again ^^

ps: petition for longer heat scenes pls OTL

[futurebruises]

haha yeah it's the most productive time to write but not exactly the most coherent
anyhoo i messed with it a bit! i didn't have too much time but i'll try to write extensions w more heat later ;D

[hipployta]

And then Yifan reappears as a cat...and he's all fake facade and cuddling at night lol...until...lol

[futurebruises]

hahaha indeed. thanks for reading & commenting!

[mrwu]

this was really cute omg but I feel like this could continue and a sequel would be great
thank you!

[futurebruises]

haha maybe! i have a ton of other things to write rn but i love this au

[read0write]

heeheehee that was nice :)
oh silly jongdae but it all worked out in the end
but omg joonmyeon and kyungsoo too cute lol
but freakin' yifan is in control! and it's great hahaha
but that was nice, nice nice nice :D

[futurebruises]

thank you so much!

[barara]

cat boys are my weakness ;_; except for chanyeol he can be a puppy boy :P loved it. loved cute kitteny wufan ♥

[futurebruises]

haha thanks! it's my first time writing a catboy au so i'm glad it worked although puppyeol is always great lol <3