Comments | fuzzy_san: Yo, Keira! Listen up!

fuzzy_san

Yo, Keira! Listen up!

Jun 30, 2009 22:06

This is a bit of poetry I did, as part of a larger project. Y'all can read it if you like, and I always love feedback, but it's kinda crap.

( This is that thing I was telling you about. Part, anyways. )

muse, keira, life, tei, performance art, poetry

Comments 8

fehriku July 1 2009, 16:25:57 UTC

I really want to hear this performed. It's got an interesting cadence to it that I can't quite get right in my head.

fuzzy_san July 1 2009, 23:57:50 UTC

:D yaay~

I really want to perform it (or, rather, have it performed), but I'm scared to read it myself because I fit the part so miserably.

sandstormkat July 1 2009, 17:00:08 UTC

I like the rythm. It's pretty catchy and makes you want to keep reading after the peice is done. Nice job on that.
It's good.

fuzzy_san July 1 2009, 23:58:01 UTC

sandstormkat July 2 2009, 04:07:55 UTC

I'll definitely want to read more of it. =D

fuzzy_firebug July 1 2009, 19:54:02 UTC

Next time I see you (which should be soon), you're telling me another story. Take a guess at which one I want to hear? :D

It's good, but I want to hear it rather than read it. I like it, but my sister won't stop distracting me which squelches it's brilliance.

I'm a tag? I feel so... special. All warm and fuzzy inside... wait, I think that's a hair ball.

<3

fuzzy_san July 1 2009, 23:58:42 UTC

:D kay.

Thanks! See reply to Marie's comment.

Might wanna take care of that.

&hearts

fuzzy_firebug July 2 2009, 05:12:14 UTC

I think you should perform it. I'd love to see that.