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Dec 22, 2007 23:31

Title: Bad Days
Part: 4/4
Pairings: MinChun and Jaeho
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Yoochun works at a coffee shop with his friend, Jaejoong. Yoochun isn't the most friendliest person you'll meet, but, a (really, really hot) customer falls for him, chaos ensues. Sort of.
Previous: P. 1
P. 2
P. 3 1/2
P. 3 2/2

part 4 )

yoomin, dbsk fanfic

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starry1 December 23 2007, 05:03:47 UTC
first
awwww that's soooo cute!..,now i sound like yunjae! *giggles*
this fic was really fun to read.. oh it's the end? well at least everyone's happy *except for the neon shirt guy and the crazy girl! lol

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gal12 December 23 2007, 20:12:56 UTC
=hands you cookies=

it is really cute! i was getting annoyed w/ chun for being so stubborn and stupid XD
yunjae makes me want to go 'aaaw' and puke X3

thanks so much for reading!

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chloe1910 December 23 2007, 07:12:02 UTC
OMG!! I love this fic..it's really full with cracks and fluff,,muahahaha..
i love corny mushy jaeho muahaha..their er, pernames calling really stole the limelight sometimes...

honestly, Yoochun er, is rather girly here..but I think that's part of the reason why Changmin fell in love with Chunnie to begin with..muahahahaha..

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gal12 December 23 2007, 20:11:21 UTC
thanks!
and yunjae... well... they're just weird like that XD
i think because chun was so... not falling for him right away and his sarcastic comments and stuff is what min fall in love with him. and what makes chun such a girl is that he's oblivious to things like guys hitting on him and stuff -.-

thanks so much for reading this fic!

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foolishlovexo December 23 2007, 07:16:04 UTC
I love this, from the first part, to this one, I couldn't stop laughing ^^
YunJae was the best, they were so~ funny.
I love how nervous Yoochun was.
And Changmin was Mr. Perfect ^^
XD

Too bad it's the end, but I really enjoyed this fic, thanks for sharing.

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gal12 December 23 2007, 20:09:26 UTC
yeah, yunjae was based off of my friend's relationship w/ her ex. seriously, they told each other stuff like 'i want to be your teddy bear' and stuff so much that i wanted to puke XD
chun had to give in and he is nervous... or just feels weird admitting his feelings =3

thanks so much for reading all of it! i really appreciate it. i'm really glad you loved it =D

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callie20 December 23 2007, 07:30:33 UTC
That is so cute. LOL. Changmin is really possessive here hahahha.

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gal12 December 23 2007, 20:06:46 UTC
thanks! and changmin is, i thought it would be cute and i think it is cute when a guy does that!

thanks so much for reading!

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imeak0 December 23 2007, 09:07:42 UTC
wah! so lovely.. hope to see more of these soon.. :D

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gal12 December 23 2007, 20:04:29 UTC
thanks! this last part was the sweetest out of all!

thanks so much for reading!

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