CHAPTER V- FOUNDATIONS

Oct 05, 2008 20:49


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maudvandutch October 5 2008, 20:46:38 UTC
Oh wow, so much happened!
I love Cottle, Laura and Bill working on the cabin together, I can just see Laura wanting to do as much as the men were doing.
And Cottle? An orphan? Sounds slightly Cylonish to me!
Laura's rant on teaching kindergarten? SO recognisable; my mom, who has taught all grades but decided to chose kindergarten in the end rants like that all the time!

D'Anna is smug and arrogant as always, loved how you wrote her. Very 'Hub-style'. :D

And I'm so glad Tigh and Bill managed to be friendly towards each other again.
Anders freaking out was so unexpected but awesome though, he was the one worried about the cylons flicking some sort of switch and activating his programming etc.
The fight was great, although I feel sorry for Bill! I hope Laura nurses him back to health and we'll get to know more about the mysterious statues in NML soon.

And wow; human-cylon elections, GREAT idea!!!!!

Conclusion: loved it, as always :)

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 13:24:37 UTC
Thankyou Maud, AWESOME comment!

So glad you are enjoying it still!

Thought it was about time Tigh and Bill started to sort their differences out. We couldn't imagine them staying at odds with each other for ever.

Anders freaking over a fit of jealousy, seeing Kara and Lee together we thought worked, Tigh had visions of shooting Bill, Tory had super human (I use the word human loosely) when she hit Cally in true Ninja style in the airlock and Tyrol totally beating the crap out of Cally (she doesn't have much luck that girl! lol) And Anders was really the only one left not to have had a freak out.

Thankyou again dude for your comment! :-)

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maudvandutch October 7 2008, 17:07:48 UTC
You're so welcome. Thanks to you two for writing this; I now have something BSG-y to look forward to every Sunday :D

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 13:25:45 UTC
Cottle is love!

It was about time Tigh and Bill sorted themselves out!

Thankyou for commenting! :-)

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babylon_whore October 5 2008, 20:52:41 UTC
This is a flyby comment cos I needs to get to bed, but I'm continuing to love the plotting on this. There's a really organic sense of development both of the story and the characters. I'm dying to see how this all unfolds.

Fabulous job you two.

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 13:27:02 UTC
Your flyby comment is greatly received! So happy you are enjoying it still BB!

Thankyou for your comment! :-)

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 13:30:18 UTC
Wow, is is an excellent thing to hear!

Glad you are enjoying the Cottle/Bill/Laura interactions.

The element of surprise with Sam is exactly what we were aiming for! *hehehe*

Thankyou for your lovely comment, it means a lot that this is being enjoyed and reviewed! :-)

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flamingo55 October 5 2008, 21:03:08 UTC
Boo, Anders. I'm coming after you myself for hurting Bill!

Still intrigued by where this is going... you're killing me with the statue thing! Nice to see Laura and Bill finally getting their cabin. And lovely to see Cottle out of sickbay for a bit. Man needs to get out more. :)

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 13:32:31 UTC
Boo, Anders. I'm coming after you myself for hurting Bill!

But you get Nurse Laura! lol And im pretty sure she won't let Anders get away with beating up her man!

Glad you are still with us and enjoying it! Thankyou so much for commenting. :-)

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