CHAPTER V- FOUNDATIONS

Oct 05, 2008 20:49


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katie_9918 October 5 2008, 21:04:16 UTC
Wow, wonderful job! I'm loving this story.

Jeez, after all the sh*t she put him through, she just drops him. Sorry, but I was cheering Sam on until he started beating on Bill. Kara and Lee deserve each other. I hope they make each other's lives miserable.

I love Laura's protectiveness over Bill.

And what is D'Anna up to? Too bad Sam couldn't get a piece of her, too, hehehehe.

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 14:56:48 UTC
Thankyou so much!

Jeez, after all the sh*t she put him through, she just drops him. Sorry, but I was cheering Sam on until he started beating on Bill. Kara and Lee deserve each other. I hope they make each other's lives miserable.

WORD! They really do deserve each other!

You will have to wait and see what D'Anna is up to, we can't disclose that kind of information just yet..you won't have long to wait though.

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hugamoose October 5 2008, 21:15:50 UTC
Great chapter Loved it~ Im glad to see Bill and Tigh starting to come to terms with it all. the banter and discussion between Laura, Bill and Cottle was great!!! Enjoyed that a lot. and Im wondering what else D'Anna is up to something no doubt. and Anders I can see whey he kind lost his mind seeing Kara there with Lee but the scary part was that he didn't seem to know what he was doing~
Great story!!!!

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 14:58:31 UTC
Cheers, thankyou!

So happy that you are still enjoying it and continue to read as the weeks go on. It means a lot to the both of us!

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zaleti October 5 2008, 21:19:19 UTC
LOVED the cabin-building scenes with Bill & Laura & Jack. They cracked me up, and it's fantastic to see some backstory floating around in there, too. Are we gonna hear more about Cottle, or was that merely a shameless red herring, LOL?

D'Anna wants to run for president? :O Scheming toaster. And Anders goes nutso-superhuman, eh? Curiouser & curiouser. But omgs, dudes, you were supposed to break Baltar's nose, not Lee's! Though he probably deserves it just as much, in some respects...

Is it next week yet?

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:03:23 UTC
Thanks dude! Glad you are still with us!

Bill,Laura and Jack are friends..so Cottle will be around a bit of course. It's always handy to have the Doc around with Bill's track record of getting shot or beaten up.

We thought Lee could do with some nose breaking action. Baltar may or may not get whats coming to him, but knowing the slippery frak weasel he is, he won't.

Only 5 days to go. It will fly by! lol

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alexis_davis02 October 5 2008, 21:48:30 UTC
Again, wooo for the Cottle apperance and I love his interaction with Bill and Laura. The aspect of just simple "normalcy" you created in the beginning of the chapter I didn't appreciate until the second read - now I see how important it is for there to just be down time for the characters before the action.

Well paced as always.

And Anders...yeah...he better watch his back before he gets stuck.

Can't wait for next week.

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:06:20 UTC
Thankyou!!!

We felt that the characters need some 'down time' occassionally. Just to give them a break from the drama! lol.

Anders need to seriously watch his back, Laura is not a happy lady!

See you on Sunday and thanks again for reading and leaving us a comment. :-)

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obsessive_a101 October 5 2008, 22:29:27 UTC
Love. (o_o) *I really need to scuttle off and study, but this has been medicine for my soul, so thank you.*

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:07:36 UTC
No thankYOU for commenting. So happy you are still with us. See you on Sunday. :-)

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