CHAPTER V- FOUNDATIONS

Oct 05, 2008 20:49


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unavitasegreta October 5 2008, 23:23:17 UTC
First of all, I love that we are getting to see Cottle! Yay! Second, I am happy to see that Bill and Saul are coming together again, even if it is still strained. You guys have written their 'break-up' and 'reconciliation' quite well. Not that I'm surprised, of course. You two are fabulous together. It is nice to see a bit of all the characters and to get to watch their interactions separate and as groups. I also enjoy Laura getting to worry about Bill and take care of him. Anders is one BIG guy. I've no doubt that he could harm both Bill and Lee - and even Kara. (And Cottle would so go for Laura, though he'd definitely get a severe beat-down from Bill for even thinking such thoughts.)

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:12:55 UTC
Thanking you!

Its good to know that the 'Breakup' and 'Reconcilliation' works. But considering they are like brothers, I don't think Bill could stay mad at Tigh for long. Something had to give.

So happy you are enjoying this still and hope you continue to enjoy it!

PS: Bill would kick ass if anyone went near his woman! LOL Jack wouldn't dare.

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unavitasegreta October 7 2008, 17:45:11 UTC
You just can't easily break up a 30 year bromance, even if one is a cylon.

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:13:32 UTC
YAY! Thankyou!

*you so do need at least one cottle icon!*

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larsfarm77 October 6 2008, 01:01:10 UTC
Things are heating up!!

Cottle is always fun, and the little domestic scene between them all was lovely.

D'anna is wonderfully consistent ... searching for power, for something to keep everyone coming to her. Individuality is going to her head, lol.

Loved the stuff with Bill and Saul -- have no clue what's going on with Anders ... lots of fun, looking forward to next week!

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:29:50 UTC
Thankyou matey!

Glad to see you still with us!

D'Anna has that devious side to her that we are trying to bring into this fic. So its great to know it is working well.

Its about time Bill/Saul sorted themselves out!

See you on Sunday and thanks again. :-)

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alias424 October 6 2008, 01:36:07 UTC
Cottle! That scene with him was absolutely fabulous! I loved how you delved into some of the history there. And the bit by the fire? So wonderfully set up. The image of Laura and Bill there had me melting, and how you introduced Anders---the way he seemed outside himself, not at all... well, human's obviously not the word for it, but human-like until Kara said his name.... Simply fantastic.

You two are outdoing yourselves. Seriously. Nothing but love for this. Can't wait to see how it continues to unfold!

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:26:22 UTC
WOW!!! Thankyou dude! Makes us happy that you are loving this and it all works.

Your comment has made me grin like a dork! Thankyou again. *hugs*

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cely October 6 2008, 07:43:10 UTC
Continuing to enjoy this! Loads!!

Loving the Bill/Laura/Cottle interactions. Random question, I've noticed that Cottle is referred to as Jack in lots of fics. Where does that come from?

D'Annna, cylon/human elections, Anders on crack. Can't wait to see where all of this is going!!

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franglaisy October 7 2008, 15:19:32 UTC
Glad you are still with us!

Well in the actual series, we are never given Cottles real name. The story I heard is that he was given this name by fanfic writers and it sort of caught on. And im sure if RDM ever did decide to give Cottle a name , it would be Jack.

Thankyou for your comment! :-)

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