CHAPTER XI

Nov 30, 2008 14:04


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maudvandutch November 30 2008, 14:45:17 UTC
Holy crap, brilliant chapter!!! Cottle revealing he's the final one, him being all-knowing, Laura not being the dying leader!!!!!!!
Wow.

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maudvandutch November 30 2008, 20:25:03 UTC
You're welcome, doll :) LAURA LIVES!!!!!!!!

Yeah, I haven't had internet for about 2 weeks now, but this fic is what makes my Sunday nights and gives me my much needed BSG fix!
Can't wait to find out what happens nextttttttttt!

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 15:26:49 UTC
Thankyou!! No way was Laura going to be the dying leader if myself and Narc had anything to do with it! lol
Glad you still with us! :-)

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larsfarm77 November 30 2008, 15:06:34 UTC
Woah, just found this ... amazing! Loved the all the head!people in the same room with Baltar (very well written), and Jack's reveal to Bill and Laura was perfect.

*runs to highest point of city*

LAURA IS NOT THE DYING LEADER!!!

*runs back*

Hopefully RDM follows you guys' lead.

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I wish RDM had listened to you! margaux_margo April 5 2014, 16:16:41 UTC
Brilliant.

Your twist makes her first recovery not feel cheap! And it makes Baltar's insanity and immersion in supernatural phenomena not seem random. Well done!

Also, larsfarm77, I loved and completely related to your triumphant run to the top of the highest peak. :)

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 15:29:22 UTC
Thankyou!

*runs to highest point of city*

LAURA IS NOT THE DYING LEADER!!!

*runs back*

Where ever you are shouting from I swear I just heard you! LOL.

I don't think Laura will be the dying leader. *prays*
Thankyou again for your feedback. :-)

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misstaggart November 30 2008, 16:12:57 UTC
zomg a new chapter!! *runs around excitedly*

I adore the scene between Laura and Cottle at the end - it was just pitch perfect and I'm looking forward to finding out what happened before and why this time around seems to be different.
Bill's reaction was so in character - I can totally see him being a skeptic about all of this and Laura adapting pretty fast and going back to pwning everyone as per usual. lol. I can totally see her turning around dramatically in Jack's chair in his office too! Love it.
And crazy dying leader Gaius is so great. You're doing a great job of juggling all these plotlines and I'm excited to see where all this is heading!

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 16:27:06 UTC
Yay! Thankyou!!!!!

So happy you are enjoying it still. I would love to see Jack as the final Cylon, he would be awesome! lol

Not long to go now before we will have this all wrapped up, hope you continue to enjoy!

x

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stiletto_freek November 30 2008, 16:14:58 UTC
Amazing chapter!

I so felt for Bill here, but at the same time wanted to kick his butt. (lmao, when I don't INASMUTTYWAY)

Cottle is totally amazing. Just..I can totally see him like this on the show. Just..AWESOME! Especially the last scene! Just shows how awesome Jack Cottle is! Even as CYLON. :)

ANOTHER AMAZING CHAPTER!

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 16:29:04 UTC
Thankyou Letto! *hugs*

I am sure kicking Bill's butt wasn't really what you had in mind... ;-)

JACK COTTLE IS AWESOME! I so badly want him to be the final cylon in 4.5!

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stiletto_freek November 30 2008, 18:26:11 UTC
OH. lmao..now I have this really funny image in my head..me caressing butt. oh my. NOOOOOOOOOOOO get it out getitout!

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i_am_davnee November 30 2008, 16:20:25 UTC
*does cartwheel for Laura not being the dying leader* I loved the scene between Laura and Cottle. I'm totally hooked on this stlory. I can't wait to see how you guys wrap this up. :D

Oh and I love that Baltar still has the subconscious hots for Laura. But seriously, who wouldn't? lol!

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franglaisy November 30 2008, 16:31:31 UTC
Thankyou Davnee!!

I am glad we have you 'hooked' and hope you continue to enjoy as we start to wrap it up. Thanks for your comment! :-)

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i_am_davnee November 30 2008, 18:34:40 UTC
If I wrote the show everyone would be in love with her.

lol! Me too!

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