{exo; sehun/luhan} speechless

[seulpeo]

Title: speechless
Fandom: exo
Pairing: kris/luhan, sehun/luhan
Word count: ~5500
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For Lu Han's entire life, he's known the restriction of the word limit. But when his best friend and rebel, Kris, takes things a step too far, just as an intriguing foreigner named Sehun enters Lu Han's life, he must make a terrible choice.
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[seulpeo]

spot for iliaccrests pls? ♥

[iliaccrests]

oh, dear. i thought this was lovely. ♥♥♥

you seem to have an affinity for au's where the government is an oppressive unjust bitch, huh? hahah (: jk usually those do inspire the most intriguing plots~

anyway, i really liked this. like. a lot. kris the rebel, lu han the softspoken, sehun the jolted new kid who tries so hard to fit into the mold given by his new country. funny because lu han tries so hard not to break the rules, kris is doing his all to escape it, and sehun is the weird happy medium where he's discontent with all this but complies just to spend time with lu han.

On the way out, between two burly, sullen-faced security guards, he gives Lu Han a wink that makes him feel sick to his stomach. and sometimes lu han wonders if kris was brave for fighting or foolish because -- really -- there's no way out

[seulpeo]

i promise that my next au will have nothing to do with the government :| its just a coincidence i swear!!

the three of them were just three perspectives of life under a rule like that, and im glad you saw them so clearly ;; and honestly, there's no way out, just like you said.
im not sure how it would have turned out if luhan had chosen kris--i tried to write it out for myself but it wouldnt come. so maybe this is the way it was meant to be? ;;;;;;

ill languish over angel!au more nowadays! i love you more, and all my words are yours ♥ thank you for such a perfect comment!!

[iliaccrests]

if you permit me to, may i make an attempt at an alternate ending where lu han goes to find kris? Haha it seems like a fun thing to take on :3 so many possibilities~~~

yes continue on angel!au, dear :) i miss you a lot but ill be back from my exams soon enough.

[enen_chan]

omfg you have no idea how much I love dystopia fics~~ I don't even know how I would live with just 150 words a day... o_O actually, now that I think about it, I could, since I'm better off just writing stuff down than actually speaking...
This was written beautifully~ Luhan, soft hearted, having to choose between Kris and Sehun~ And Sehun trying to become accustomed to not talking so much~
And Kris, omg. That last sentence paragraph was just so sad ;_; I'm actually slightly teary~

[seulpeo]

ikr, dystopic aus are so lovely :c
i would probably spend a lot of time writing too! out of all three, id match myself closest to luhan ;;

thank you sfm for the comment, and tissues to wipe your tears with? ♥

[seulpeo]

you flatter me!!
throws you a life preserver, thank you for commenting ♥

[envybleedsgreen]

Oh, my. This was brilliant.

[seulpeo]

BRILLIANCE IS A BIT OF A STRETCH, but thank you ♥!!

[seulpeo]

ill take intense as a compliment!?
im sry about your krishan heart :( sehan is so irresistible though, i cant stand them without feeling like i need to bash my head happily against a wall :|

thank you for reading! ♥