{exo; sehun/luhan} speechless

[seulpeo]

Title: speechless
Fandom: exo
Pairing: kris/luhan, sehun/luhan
Word count: ~5500
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For Lu Han's entire life, he's known the restriction of the word limit. But when his best friend and rebel, Kris, takes things a step too far, just as an intriguing foreigner named Sehun enters Lu Han's life, he must make a terrible choice.
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Comments

[seulpeo]

OMFG THE GIF HAHAHAHA

your awe is greatly appreciated though probably not completely deserved ;; but im so glad you pulled so much from the fic, thats what i write for! ♥
how could you compare me with ray bradbury, omfg, i studied fahrenheit 451 in school I AM NOT THAT BRILLIANT?? this is overwhelmingly flattering i cant even :c

this was honestly the most praise i could ever dream to receive as a writer, thank you so much ;;

[seulpeo]

LMFAO IM GLAD I COULD MAKE YOU FEEL THIS WAY???

no, no, you were wonderful ;_; thank you again!

[yoake_no_sora]

Remarkable piece of fiction.

I can't even imagine having to live with only 150 words a day or without music with words or computers omg my internet. Sehun must have had a terrible time. What surprised me was that they actually let people enter the country from the outside even if it was tightly controlled. And that people actually speak without much problems when they want to (within their word limit of course) since they would have only really heard actual words sparingly as they learned how to speak. (Or maybe I'm thinking too much.)

[seulpeo]

i always have so many things to say, i dont know how i could survive like that either :( and with no words, there would be no entertainment the way we know it!?
but of course the country still has to support itself, since no one can sustain themselves entirely. so theres a bit of outside trading and therefore people from the outside seeping in.

theres nothing wrong with thinking on fic! sometimes people find plotholes i dont consider~
thank you for reading ♥

[starrymoons]

oh my god.
first of all, the concept is amazing. i can't express my feelings because i am /awful/ with words but just laksjdflakf
but luhan, the way he can't pull away from sehun to stay with kris just w h y i want to cry ;____;
BUT KRIS DIED WHY WHY WHY SOB
ANYWAY. IT WAS FABULOUS BUT SO SAD BUT YEAH. YEAH.

[seulpeo]

thank you so very much for reading ♥

I COULDNT HELP IT OKAY THATS WHAT THE STORY WANTED FROM ME :(

[livesmiling]

motherf brillz

[seulpeo]

lmfao thanks :D!

[madelyn93]

oh i have always loved 'the quiet world'. i have the poem scribbled on the back of my notebook, in fact.

this was so lovely. the idea where only a single country observes the silent rule is interesting. it's nice how you fleshed out the entire oppressed government thing without going too much into the actual workings of the government because then the fic would turn too heavy. instead there's a whimsical feel to everything, scenes brief and perfect.
the choice between kris and sehun is hardbreaking, and i like how luhan never leaves kris behind even after so many years.

thank you for sharing this :)

[seulpeo]

its such a beautiful poem, i lingered on it for the longest time and turned it over and over in my mind until this came up ;;

thank you for reading, and im so glad you got the feeling i hoped for from this fic! im always shaky with government based aus bcos of all the possible plotholes :(