{exo; sehun/luhan} speechless

Jun 11, 2012 09:37

Title: speechless
Fandom: exo
Pairing: kris/luhan, sehun/luhan
Word count: ~5500
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For Lu Han's entire life, he's known the restriction of the word limit. But when his best friend and rebel, Kris, takes things a step too far, just as an intriguing foreigner named Sehun enters Lu Han's life, he must make a terrible choice.
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pairing: sehun/luhan, pairing: kris/luhan, fandom: exo

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hopeandmemory June 14 2012, 02:29:18 UTC
okay i already gushed at you on twitter about this but i just thought this idea was so unique and unusual. it makes the conciseness of twitter a little terrifying when you think about it that way; we're learning to speak using fewer words and less creativity. it's really interesting how it plays with communication, and how speech has to become less communicative because it's so restricted. ;kasdjalsdf I DON'T KNOW all i know is that this is REALLY cool and you are brilliant for coming up with this idea. nicely done. <3

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seulpeo June 14 2012, 21:16:50 UTC
eek doesnt it!? language has already reduced you to u and such, cutting off extraneous words, but its so powerful?
thank you sfm for reading and commenting, liz ;; ♥

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mworani June 14 2012, 11:44:35 UTC
Oh my god... *O* Stumbled to this fic while looking for interesting fic to read despite it not being Infinite... Your writing in this oneshot completely floored me. Just. So descriptive and so many things got across even without that much actual dialogue and things like that...

And Kris... ;O;

This was amazing. Thank you for writing such great fic. ♥

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seulpeo June 14 2012, 21:17:26 UTC
thank you sfm ;~~~~~~;
you reading this and commenting means a lot to me! ♥

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feixing June 14 2012, 14:24:40 UTC
oh wow.

this was beautifully executed, emmi. the flow was amazing, the descriptions and just... everything.
i am terrible with comments, but this fic did something for me, touched me somewhere deep.
i am really incoherent ugh but basically i love this, and i thought the ending was brilliant, not too happy, but not entirely sad either. i like endings like that because that's how... life ends up anyway. it's never exceptionally happy or sad, but somewhere in between, both good and bad. sigh idk.

anyway this was lovely, you definitely should write more exo. ♥

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seulpeo June 14 2012, 21:18:53 UTC
im really happy that this fic did something, anything, for you c:
thank you for reading, rachael! ♥♥♥

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destroyedcastle June 21 2012, 04:31:36 UTC
Omfg, Emmi, you little poop. ;____;
This was so good I'm going to CRY.
FUGHgfi.
I think I had an anxiety attack okay u__u
(You saw me on twitter ok)
Ugh, this was perfect. ; n;

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seulpeo June 21 2012, 19:03:36 UTC
HI EMILY, WELCOME TO LJ :D :D
im sry for giving you an anxiety attack why does this always happen :c tysfm for reading and enjoying though!!

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JUNE 11-17, 2012 livejournal June 24 2012, 12:54:22 UTC
User bookofexodus referenced to your post from JUNE 11-17, 2012 saying: [...] and constant friendliness. They can’t coexist nor can he survive without either of them.) [...]

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