{exo; sehun/luhan} speechless

[seulpeo]

Title: speechless
Fandom: exo
Pairing: kris/luhan, sehun/luhan
Word count: ~5500
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For Lu Han's entire life, he's known the restriction of the word limit. But when his best friend and rebel, Kris, takes things a step too far, just as an intriguing foreigner named Sehun enters Lu Han's life, he must make a terrible choice.
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Comments

[shihan_ai]

oh wow, just- your title is so appropriate, because i'm speechless right now

i love dystopian AUs and yours is just wonderfully intense and heartbreaking and emotionally brutal in the best ways. luhan having to choose between sehun and kris, oh god my heart ;_____;

ugh your writing has a gorgeous flow to it and you managed to convey the terrible oppressive nature of the regime so well

♥

[seulpeo]

i just, thank you so much ;~;
im really happy that my fic could leave such a nice impression on you! ♥

[epikfailure]

do i win

wOW GOES TO CRY A PUDDLE SINCE WHEN DID YOU WRITE HEARTBREAKING THINGS WITHOUT TELLING ME ))):

whispers i want to punch sehun hdu kris was his BRO how could you Q_______Q

and the END w0w ok emmi what do you want from me do you want my heart huh you can have it keeps getting beat up by all these sadfic Q____Q jeez

((whispers i loved this actually why did i put off finishing))

[seulpeo]

omfg OMFG IM SRY I DIDNT MEAN TO TRAMPLE ON YOUR HEART LIKE THAT PLS ACCEPT MY APOLOGIES, ITS WHAT THE FIC WANTED FROM ME

um jw how long did it take you to finish this smh?? do i have to start spotting you or sth
tysfm though, lorrie, im glad you liked it ;3;

[epikfailure]

YEaH U BETTER BE ))))): all sad and... sad rn

well i mean i read the first half when you posted it and finished today and apparently you posted it 2 weeks ago... uh ((yes spots pls motivate me))

rolls on u this is what i wanted tho ;; i rly did love it and rolls on myself bc im lazy and dont get to reading things!!! ahh forgive me ;;

[seulpeo]

ack lorrie im sry for all the sad 8(

its okay if youre slow!! ill spot you in the future \o/
besides, as long as you read and enjoy my fic--which you arent obliged to do--then thats more than enough for me ;3;

[jejun]

This was lovely :'(

[seulpeo]

thank you sfm for reading ;~~;

[celleyou]

Wow, this was really different. In a really really good way, of course. 1984, Brave New world, Fahrenheit [insert numbers here that I can never remember] have always been my favorite books. If this was a book, it would have definitely made my list of dystopian favorites. I really enjoyed this fic:]
Somehow though, this reminded me of the Hunger Games o-o I'm not sure if you've read the ending so I'm not gonna say anything :x

[seulpeo]

i think you mean fahrenheit 451! i studied that book in school ^_____^
its an honor to imagine my fic as a full-out book omfg ;~; thank you for reading and enjoying my take on dystopias~

ive read all 3 books of the hunger games too! though ngl, mockingjay kind of fell apart but i did like the very end ending and the previous 2 books~ but im glad you made a connection to the hunger games bcos all in all it was an excellent series and a wonderful work :'D

♥

[celleyou]

:D
Okay, I can talk about it then lol. [Spoilers for people who haven't read all 3 hunger games books yet] You know how in the end, she chose the one that she couldn't live without? I felt like Luhan's decision in this fic was kinda like Katniss's decision. I felt like he definitely picked the one he couldn't be without. Kris and Sehun like Gale and Peeta in their personalities almost. While Katniss/Luhan felt an attraction to both of them, she/he had to have the peace and security of one versus the firey personality of the other. /end rant/ Yeah, I hope that made sense. I was trying to say it without like, obviously dead giveaways in case others saw this.

[seulpeo]

;~~~~~~; omfg i never realized that connection, youre right??
thank you for thinking to compare my fic to such a popular and intense novel aaaack ^_______^;;

[anonymous]

crying so much right now. thank you for this read. =(

[seulpeo]

oh anon, i didnt want you to cry ;;;;;
thank you sfm for reading ♥