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Feb 17, 2004 14:43

I wrote this, or perhaps I have Shakespeare in my closet. He really should come out of the closet if that is the case. Anyhow it's still a bit raw and unrefined. I may do some toggling with it anon ( Read more... )

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mara_jade3 February 17 2004, 13:36:00 UTC
Well, I'd say you certainly have Shakespeare in your closet. I'd like to know how he got there. hehe You always write the best stiff. I wish I could write poems like you can. You're the best. What more can I say?

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Re: gant_boy February 17 2004, 13:39:35 UTC
Aye, I do write pretty well for a stiff.

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Re: piks_angel February 17 2004, 13:41:43 UTC
You write pretty well with a stiffy too I imagine. This was good I liked it. You never cease to amaze and awe the masses.

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Re: gant_boy February 17 2004, 13:44:49 UTC
Well it's never been much good as a pen.

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_thegood_girl_ February 17 2004, 13:41:48 UTC
*claps* Very good....very Shakespearean. :)

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Re: to be or not to be? gant_boy February 17 2004, 13:43:40 UTC
Thank you sweetheart

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Re: to be or not to be? _thegood_girl_ February 17 2004, 18:46:12 UTC
You're quite welcome. :)

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Re: to be or not to be? gant_boy February 17 2004, 21:51:09 UTC
I get the smiles face. I'm so special!

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april_chantia February 17 2004, 15:17:56 UTC
Once again I must say how wonderful you are with words. Just amazing to know that you can write something and make it come alive through the pages... through a monitor and actually move someone to where they can barely think or rather breath.
Amazing... just... amazing.

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gant_boy February 17 2004, 16:01:20 UTC
I'm glad my words can touch you and move you in the way they are intended.

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april_chantia February 17 2004, 19:23:55 UTC
I am to... though I wish I had something grander to say but with my foul mood I have nothing but anger... perhaps I shall write a book on the impact of stupid people upon innocent lives

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Re: gant_boy February 17 2004, 21:52:49 UTC
I'm not sure what to say to this as I see that your mind is on your niece again. I do not know what comfort I can offer you but if you ever need me just call me.

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snapesvixen February 17 2004, 15:59:19 UTC
I liked it when I first read it. I like it now.

*winks*

Surprise, I added you.

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gant_boy February 17 2004, 16:03:41 UTC
So I see! And thank you.

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firewalkwithme February 17 2004, 19:03:38 UTC
Hello poet.

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Re: gant_boy February 17 2004, 21:53:51 UTC
Hello Brie...I need to take the oppertunity to read your journal now that you've added me.

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