Comments | gazerotica: Sugar Pain Chp.15. Uruha/Aoi

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Sugar Pain Chp.15. Uruha/Aoi

Feb 24, 2010 14:57

Title : Sugar Pain
Chap : 15/ ?
Pairing : Uruha/Aoi
Genre : angst, drama, smut
Rating : NC-17
Warning : sex
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, I’m not affiliated, it’s all just fiction from my warped imagination.
Summary : Aoi is infatuated with Uruha but Uruha thinks he’s pathetic - that doesn’t stop him embarking on a dark relationship with the other ( Read more... )

fic: sugar pain, band: gazette, pairing: uruhaxaoi

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gazerotica February 24 2010, 15:34:43 UTC

My, that was quick! Have extra special quickness cookies hun xx

Remember, this is Uruha we're talking about! And we still have a long way to go in this fic yet ... But I did want to show that he isn't always a cold-hearted bastard, just mostly haha!

maunetjeret February 24 2010, 15:15:10 UTC

Well shit. Only morning will tell how this turns out. I had hope until they got to playing in bed. It leaves me with the "Will you still respect me in the morning?" feeling.

gazerotica February 24 2010, 15:35:35 UTC

You get special quick cookies too xx

and another for being psychic! XD

maunetjeret February 24 2010, 15:59:35 UTC

*Munches on cookies* Psychic, really? =p

nandedattebayo February 24 2010, 15:35:28 UTC

*¬*

If Uruha wasn't an asshole / he must have a personality disorder / me and Aoi would be so happy, demo, GREAT SMUT honey!!!

This fic only gets better<333

gazerotica February 24 2010, 15:37:11 UTC

Asshole? Maybe ... we'll see ...

That smut was so hard to write, you would not believe! haha

thank you x

liraelx February 24 2010, 15:37:17 UTC

Oh Aoi, not again -.-

gazerotica February 24 2010, 15:42:16 UTC

What can I say? Boy has a problem! XDD

kawasakininja February 24 2010, 15:50:00 UTC

Oh, wow. What a curve ball! I don't know what to think of Uruha (as usual). How he dragged Aoi to that industrial complex I almost expected Uruha to rape him and dump his body somewhere. Seriously, nothing could have surprised me as much as what actually happened. Uruha taking Aoi to ESP. But I thought it was nice and maybe Uruha didn't only want Aoi with him, but needed him in some way. As his bandmate and senior, because he could have been nervous about the whole deal more than he showed. Or it is just my fanciful thinking :) Still Uruha is full of surprises and I can't help but wonder is there a real attraction to Aoi, because this could have been just a drunken shag, but what he said to Aoi gives hope there could be more to it. Equality instead of fearful submition was a nice change of pace. Still, if I were Aoi I wouldn't stick around until morning :D God, now I am afraid you'll make him stick around :)))) But can't wait for more, I was so pleased to see another chapter so soon ♥

gazerotica February 25 2010, 09:41:34 UTC

I must be slightly sadistic but I do enjoy screwing with people's perceptions and expectations with this fic XD I laughed at how many people thought Uruha was going to rape/murder Aoi and dump his body mwhahahaha! I have obviously succeeded in making everyone believe in a truly nasty, sadistic, cold-hearted bastard Uchan! *whoot*

There is still so much to come - this fic will run to 30 - 40 chapters on current plan. I'm really in the swing of writing it again right now, but we'll see how long that lasts!
As for Uruha, well, put it this way - I have deliberately not shown what he was thinking for some time. You will find out ... eventually ...

As for what happens next ... soon, very soon, I promise xx