Sugar Pain Chp.15. Uruha/Aoi

[gazerotica]

Title : Sugar Pain
Chap : 15/ ?
Pairing : Uruha/Aoi
Genre : angst, drama, smut
Rating : NC-17
Warning : sex
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, I’m not affiliated, it’s all just fiction from my warped imagination.
Summary : Aoi is infatuated with Uruha but Uruha thinks he’s pathetic - that doesn’t stop him embarking on a dark relationship with the other

Comments

[vampire_kiki]

so happy to see another update!!! and glad to have more UruhaxAoi going on!^O^

[gazerotica]

I've really got back into writing this now - so updates will be a lot more frequent for a while x

[vampire_kiki]

yeah i'm so happy!

but just as someone else had mentioned, i'm worrying about Aoi letting his guard down! after all Uru is such an asshole in that story.XD

[kurrren]

Oh my... That smut was hot! HOTHOTHOT! I got these nice mental pictures/glimpses of sweaty limbs, Aoi's hair fanning out on a pillow and.. just hotness..
But you keep me on my toes with this story! I don't know what to expect everytime I click on a new chapter, and let me tell you that is rare!
Lots and lots of cookies for you since you're so awesome! :)

[gazerotica]

Believe me smut is quite difficult to write when those same mental pictures are the ones fuelling it! *phew*

I like to keep my readers interested and guessing - thank you for that comment x

And yay! cookies! *muches happily while doing the 'I iz Awesome!' dance*

[laurasljn]

this chapter has me kind of worried....it's just that with everything Uru did he gave Aoi hope...and then ... I guess I'll have to wait and see...

[gazerotica]

Yes, poor Aoi - hope is a word that will appear next chapter, but will it be in vain? Ah ha, wait and see ... *I'm so cruel!*

xx

[n3uromanc3r]

What happened to Uruha? I can't recognize him, he behaves really strange!
I don't say I don't like it, it was a really nice surprise, how he seemed so carefree and happy.

I liked their confession at the bar, it gave me hope, maybe Uruha still has heart.

And I really enjoyed the last scene of course! It's was really good to see the change not only in the way Uruha treated Aoi, but how Aoi also became an active character of the happenings instead of the well known helpless role he played till now.

I'm really curious about their morning, or their next meeting at work if Aoi doesn't prefer to stay there till morning.

[gazerotica]

Think back to when they were talking about music - Uruha can be a nice guy but it's rare, and Aoi does seem to bring out the worst in him.
I'm not saying this is a changed Uruha though, oh no, we have so much further to go (at current plan this fic runs to between 30 and 40 chapters, depending on various characters' emo-ness)

The bar scene was a step forward but we shall have to wait and see what happens next ...

thanks for reading and commenting hun x

[gazerotica]

Yay! Uruha can be nice! It's true! But will it last? mwhahahahahha *ahem* Evil!

xx