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Sugar Pain Chp.15. Uruha/Aoi

Feb 24, 2010 14:57

Title : Sugar Pain
Chap : 15/ ?
Pairing : Uruha/Aoi
Genre : angst, drama, smut
Rating : NC-17
Warning : sex
Disclaimer : I don’t own them, I’m not affiliated, it’s all just fiction from my warped imagination.
Summary : Aoi is infatuated with Uruha but Uruha thinks he’s pathetic - that doesn’t stop him embarking on a dark relationship with the other ( Read more... )

fic: sugar pain, band: gazette, pairing: uruhaxaoi

Comments 38

luna_no_koibito February 24 2010, 20:34:33 UTC

Jesus Christ mom!!!

Like ...like ... AAAAARGH!
I seriously was already constructing my comment in my head, and then you slap in raw sex, that has my comment going "..." as I melt reading this awesomely distracting sexy moment *sighs* ... *coughs* lets try and make this comment now shall we?

When Uruha showed up at Aoi's apartment, my brain literally went "look at the peep-hole!!!!" and then once the door was open I was like "This is the end ..." and the rest of the song went on as well LOL . Yet, nothing happened. As they went to ESP, I thought he was going to embarrass him somewhere, do something to him, and then magically create a changing room, or something in the building, rape him, and leave him there. Yet ... nothing happened and I would like you to know that throughout the moment from which Uruha appeared to the time they went to his apartment, I kept whispering to myself "Something is going to happen, something is going to happen ..."So I am hyperventilating, as they get into his apartment, and I knew they were going to do ( ... )

gazerotica February 25 2010, 09:58:57 UTC

You would not believe how long it took me to write that smut - several hours of staring at screen, trying to dismiss the mental images of HOTNESS, a million cigarettes later ... damn ( ... )

erikaoi February 24 2010, 22:34:21 UTC

Wonder what make uru change.but im all glad thou,i mean aoi deserved it.now im worried what wud aoi be facing next morning when uru wake up..

gazerotica February 25 2010, 09:59:40 UTC

A little change, a step in the right direction maybe? We shall see ...

xx

irmavep777 February 24 2010, 23:39:17 UTC

this was..oh..yeah..finally!yes yes yes!!they made love!!!
okay..not quite..but Aoi wasn't raped this time..and oh Uruha cares!!<3
Even when I adore Aoi uke, he still neds to be more confident about himself because that's what will put Uruha to his knees..!
ahhh I will totally read the previous chaps!
<3

gazerotica February 25 2010, 10:00:56 UTC

I love your take on ukeAoi - spot on hunny! *have a cookie*

But not so 'finally', there is still a long way to go yet ...

irmavep777 February 25 2010, 10:14:30 UTC

*munches on the cookie*thank you dear!

ah well..sadly I'm well aware of that:(*pouts*...ah love is complicated:/

1337_lurker February 25 2010, 01:21:51 UTC

HOLY MOTHER OF CRAP!!! O___o ( ... )

gazerotica February 25 2010, 10:06:35 UTC

Hi there Lurker! XDD
I love a new reader - especially when they leave me comments like this! Have a cookie xx

ReitaxRuki - somehow they just go together so well, but life is not always peachy and roses - don't worry though, their story here is not finished by a long shot!
I like that you find Kai realistic - I hope they all come across fairly real! Mommy-Kai *sniggers* yep, I can go with that!
As for poor Aoi, and confusing ol'Uruha ... well, wait and see ...

and I love long comments - long comments WIN big time - thank you hunny xx

worldballad February 25 2010, 02:29:23 UTC

Good Uru now?

gazerotica February 25 2010, 10:07:22 UTC

Maybe? Maybe not! XD

Wait and see - we still have a long way to go xx