Comments | generationxhero: oneshot : exploration, declaration

generationxhero

oneshot : exploration, declaration

Dec 18, 2010 18:53

title: Exploration, Declaration
author: Sharmel
pairing: Billie/Tre
rating: R
summary: "With a convincing smile imprinted on my face, I nodded supportively while I swallowed the poisonous disease called envy crawling out from the pit of my stomach when he told us about his new girl."

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slash, one-shot, pairing: billie/tre, rating: r

Comments 7

tophie_chan December 20 2010, 02:33:58 UTC

awww...sooo nice!
I like the last part
well,..I really would have prefered tht they continue what they were doing..XDD..
but this end work x me!

generationxhero December 22 2010, 04:08:56 UTC

Ahaha, yes. I was debating whether or not too, but gah, I dislike writing smut.
Thanks for the comment. <3

ordinaryxday December 21 2010, 18:30:46 UTC

Sorry I didn't comment earlier, I had seen that you posted this and made a mental note to read it and then I was MIA from the internet for a good twenty hours due to sleep and work.
But anyways. Just read it.

Holy shit, girl, this was fantastic.
The sexual tension was written out quite nicely and I loved how they stopped and didn't do anything more, made it seem more real, y'know?
It was very bittersweet, which I love, with how they finally told each other but then they stopped each other. If that makes sense.

Anyways, it was lovely and ten thousand times better than the one-shots I attempted to write.
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generationxhero December 22 2010, 04:12:10 UTC

Haha, dude, no worries. I was like, oh noes, was this really that bad? lmfao.

Aw man, thanks so much. You know me and making it seem more realistic. And it definitely does make sense.

And omg, no way. I'm so pumped for that awesome oneshot you're planning on writing! People's minds will be blown.
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anonymous December 27 2010, 22:30:44 UTC

Jesus [of Suburbia], I swear you get better every time you write. One of my favorite lines: "I was nothing but a puddle of mess melting under his fingertips." There's no better way to describe the way he feels. Love is wonderful despite the fact that it makes a person a mess, and because of it. GAH, you rock.

Also, epic win on writing "holyfuckingshit" as one word. Seriously, epic win. Publish everything and I'll buy it all.

Hope to catch you on AIM again soon :)

-Tara

generationxhero December 29 2010, 00:38:22 UTC

Aw man thank you so much! You comments never fails to make me smile.

WOW idiot4gd July 30 2015, 14:52:25 UTC

I'm new to this community so I know I'm five years late and you may not even see this... but that made me dizzy... you are so very talented... :)