Sep 12, 2024 17:46
My soul has the indents of wicked teeth
embedded in the gentle flesh
that somehow still clings to me
I am not the fairy doll of days gone by
doe eyed and sad for the sake
of crooning lullabyes
Morning has gazed upon me
Mourning has grazed upon me.
Falling has deformed me.
Loving has reformed me.
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Ah, you haven't lost your touch with metaphors - I'm envious in a good way.
The opening verse
"My soul has the indents of wicked teeth
embedded in the gentle flesh
that somehow still clings to me..."
Wow - powerful yet soft in the same breath. Great way to open a poem. Really love this.
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