Ouroboros

Nov 04, 2024 11:26


This life swallows me whole

as I consume it

bite by careful bite.

I am tired of being held

by the tongue

while the song is smothered

in another's mouth.

I circle back to the beginning

each time I say goodnight.

The sun bites the horizon

and I choke on the light.

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ka_eul_234 November 5 2024, 04:56:05 UTC

Wow, Clancy, this is a phenomenal piece and you did justice to the image of the ouroboros. You captured it in strong feeling and emotion.

I hope you are doing okay. Again, I really enjoyed your wordsmithing. ❤️

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ghostofagypsy November 6 2024, 12:07:46 UTC
Thank you, Suzy! 💜 The ouroboros is one of my favorite symbols and it's been on my mind lately.

I'm doing alright.. :) I hope you are, as well.

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mezcal November 12 2024, 19:14:09 UTC

Well done. Happy to see you are still writing poetry.

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ghostofagypsy November 13 2024, 14:53:35 UTC
Thank you! I wasn't for a very long time but I'm back at it. A little rusty and unsure of what my voice is now, but still writing!

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