How's My Driving?

Anonymous on, IP-logging off, comments screened. Please tell me if I end up doing it wrong, or hell, maybe I'm doing something right somehow. Believe me, it helps! Thanks. o7

OOC:

Name: Fyre
Are you over 16?: Yes!
Personal LJ: fyretoppaaa
Email: hotaru.no.tamashii[at]gmail[dot]com
Timezone: PST
Other contact: [AIM] eighth helleluia
Characters already in the game: N/A
How did you find us?: It's all Dr. Pin-mun's fault. :I

( Let's fry up some bigger fish, eh? )