The obligatory critique post!

Here's the place to tell me if I'm failing, "doing it wrong", or even passing with a decent grade. I'd love to see how I'm doing! I don't want to ruin one of my favourite characters, so I'd really like some advice!

I'd love it if you could suggest some things I could do to improve. Thank you! I'm trying hard, so I'll ( Read more... )

Coooooold.... it's too cold!

I can't even play Giita, and I can't find his little hat! I like the winter and snow a lot but it's not fun when I can't have hotpot and curl up and be warm! Uuuuu.... and I just got a kotatsu too. I wore my scarf and mittens to sleep last night and even my sheets and blankets weren't enough! This is really mean.... what ( Read more... )

Does this mean I can't eat any of the cake in the stores?

Um.... Are cakes even made with milk?

[Someone's gotten away with not drinking any milk so far this week! Lucky girl.]

One time, I ate the last slice of cake without telling anyone.

Azu-nyan! We should have a Christmas party! And we should eat cake and give presents and.... have a white Christmas! Sawa-chan-sensei's probably going to be with her boyfriend so I don't think she'll come. [Open mouth, insert foot.] We decorated the Christmas tree really pretty this year! It's a lot more festive here than it is at home! And Santa's ( Read more... )

[So Yui finds herself in this random car. And there's a movie playing. Okay, it's clearly time to check the most important things!

Giita is in the back seat! This is cooler than Sawa-chan's car! And best of all.... THERE ARE FRICKING MILKSHAKES AND FRIES TOO BUT MOSTLY MILKSHAKES.

Forget wondering where she is or how this happened. These milkshakes ( Read more... )

So if I buy enough of this cereal could I get Mugi-chan to come here and make me sweets every day? Maybe she's a bonus prize.

[ooc: DERP, Mugi wasn't on her list, which basically includes lots of clothes, super bizarre plushies (lemons with faces!), and her cell phone.]

[Hey there factory workers, are you having fun working? No? Good! Yui's come to sing patriotic songs to you! And yet.... she doesn't have her beloved Giita with her, so she's air guitaring and looking more than slightly worried.]

GO GO FACTORY WORKERS, YOU CAN DO YOUR BEST
WORK HARD AND PUT THE PEOPLE TO THE TEST~ ♫
GO GO WORK FOR THE FLAG WITH THE--

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Everyone keeps saying that there are bad people out today, but I don't see anyone! If I have to stay away from boys, that means that I have to stay away from Giita too. He'd get so lonely all by himself up in my room.... so I'm not gonna listen!

Giita and I are going to go swimmi--

[She pauses and ponders this.]

We're going to go take a walk in the ( Read more... )

[If you happen to be within a street or two of 773 Bunker, you're likely to hear the reverb of an amplified electric guitar echoing between the rooftops of houses. Yui is currently sitting on the front steps of her house, playing this first song and singing along in her wonderfully high-pitched voice. Feel free to admire her playing, slap her for ( Read more... )