Fic: Way Out Here (Chapter I)

[gildedmuse]

Author: Gildedmuse/Stephanie
Title: Way Out Here
Chapter: One - Family
Fandom: Firefly
Characters/Pairings: To Be - Mal/Simon (River, Jayne, Zoe, Kaylee, Inara)
Rating/Warning: PG-13
Word Count: 5,780
Summary: Set after the BDM. Simon takes care of everyone that Mal insists on putting in danger.
Author's Note: I promise slash by, like, at least

Comments

[shadow_mage]

This will be my first FULL CHAPTERS Firefly! Yay!

I love Anne so much, and you can see the build ups already. :D

[gildedmuse]

Oh, goodness, you said you could see the build up. I think I love you. ^^ Since, you know, I spent half the time yelling at my computer screen. "God, Simon!" I was screaming, as you do, "Be gayer! Notice Mal's ass! It's a cute ass, damnit!"

Anyway, now Krissy thinks I'm insane but, you know, whatever. Someone said they saw build up without a paragraph on Mal's tush. Worth it.

[shadow_mage]

And I love YOU for your wonderful talent that makes me green with a jealousy urge to smash my head into wall. And, of course, for your wonderful comment replies to me that like, make my whole LIFE. :D

[gildedmuse]

I have found, after many hours of experimenting, that bashing my head into walls rarely helps solve anything. Unless it's a school essay, and then it's the best way to get through them.

[gildedmuse]

And with any luck, my mind won't suck and more will come quickly.

[gildedmuse]

It's amazing how little clothing has to be involved in fixing someone

Oh, me, too. And I hope it's drawn out and angsty because, you know, that's the fun stuff to write.

[devo79]

great start.

[gildedmuse]

Thank you.

[anxiety_junkie]

Excellent start! You're really going in depth here, I like it. All of your voices are good so far, especially Zoe. And I like that one of the pieces of Simon's medical advice that Mal constantly ignores is stop fiddling with that. Hee!

[gildedmuse]

Not so much in-depth as my utter lack of ability to chop down on wordiness. ^^ And thank you, I'm so nervous about Zoe. I love her too much to ruin her hopefully.