"Echoes of Always" - Luke/Mara - Epilogue, 4/25

Apr 25, 2012 09:57


I liked the notes I wrote over at ff.net so I left them intact here at the end of the epilogue.   I have another post of notes coming up, too.  I have a lot to say!!  ;)

EoA Epilogue )

luke skywalker, l/m, nano, star wars, alternate universe, mara jade

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briannakin April 25 2012, 16:55:57 UTC
Perfect ending <3 Luke will get to hold his Mara one day, but for now, all he needs is Ben.

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ginchy April 30 2012, 16:44:09 UTC
You're so right. He needs to live his life for Ben, just like Mara wanted. Thank you, girl!!

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immertreu April 25 2012, 19:08:28 UTC
Can I just say AWWWWWWWWW for now? This was the perfect ending, and I am sooo glad Luke found his balance and his will to live and his love for his son again!

I read the last few chapters in a row because I had a lot of catching up to do. I hope I can go back soon and give more detailed feedback for single chapters (if you like).

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with us! I have some serious thinking to do now. :)

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ginchy April 30 2012, 16:45:40 UTC
Thank you so much!! I'm so glad it gave you a feeling of 'awwww'. I love inspiring that feeling! Luke realizing he should live for his son was so needed, but I know it was always within him, just lost in the grief.

I would love to hear any other thoughts you may have on the fic! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. It means so much to me!

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phantompopcorn April 26 2012, 13:08:13 UTC
What a fitting end! Your conclusion was wonderfully satisfying. Well done on a truly amazing and thoughtful story!

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ginchy April 30 2012, 16:46:28 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad the ending was satisfying. I loved it myself, but was afraid it was still too bittersweet for closure. I'm glad that was not the case!

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katajanmaria April 27 2012, 16:54:56 UTC
This is simply one of the most beautiful and awesome fanfics I've read in a long time! No, heck, in alltime! The maturity, the sweetness and the longuing is unique - and add to that a fabulous balance; you've all the time been aware exactly how far you can push this, both in form and emotion.

And of course you managed to do that in this epologue too! Usually I don't much like epilogues - but this was perfect! Adored that Mara touched Luke suddenly it was THEM again, nothing even ebing able to change taht, loved Luke & Ben's intersaction - and of course - the last line!!!!

Thank you for this story! One of those that makes life richer!

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ginchy April 30 2012, 16:48:31 UTC
Lady, thank YOU! I'm so glad you've loved the story as much as you have. I wanted it to have maturity, and I'm glad you found that to be the case.

You don't like epilogues?? hee! Those are always my favorite part of the story!! In that case, I'm doubly glad you liked this epilogue!!

I was a bit torn on ghost Mara making an appearance, so I settled for her being there but not in blue ghostie form. I just think he--they--deserved that eternal moment.

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lotusflower85 April 28 2012, 10:22:04 UTC
Amazing fic, gal, start to finish. I loved loved loved Luke repeating "I'll come with you" - so fitting, since Ben is like Mara in so many ways and I think, Luke has to bridge the same gap with Ben and he did with Mara, all those years before.

Just beautiful. I look forward to reading other fics set in the AU, although I know you have a lot on your plate!

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ginchy April 30 2012, 16:49:57 UTC
Thanks, girl!! *hugs* I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I remember your 'Chasing Dreams' and how much I loved your Skywalker family there, so I'm so pleased you enjoyed mine here, such as it is. And you're so right about Luke bridging that gap.

I hope to have more from the AU this summer... Mi Mi needs to sleep again so Mommy can write!! ;)

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