Read it...do it, or I'll fight you.

[give_me_a_slice]

GREGOR and WILLIE are hiding in a cupboard in a dimly lit room. The curtains are drawn and a clock is ticking

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[crazy_cello]

Gregor: (Sitting on the bottom step sobbing) It was only a game.

That Gregor isn't in caps.

It's annoying that the names are in Caps though. shouldn't they be in italics or something like that, or bold!
and the text following should be intended with a tab or directly underneath i think.

I like it though, you know the important part, the actual words and shit.

[give_me_a_slice]

Ta, I didn't even notice that wasn't a caps:) And in plays the names are meant to be caps, apparently. That's what I was taught.
But that's the format it's meant to be, it obviously looks different here than it does in word.

I wasn't feeling very creative when I wrote it :( but my class liked it and the tutor like it so *shrug* whatevs!

[crazy_cello]

please dont say whatevs, the dirty lesbian and her fag accomplice in my degree say it all the time. i hate them so much!

[crazy_cello]

ps. I've had a really shit day