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Possibilities

Mar 29, 2010 17:00

Title: Possibilities
Rating: K+
Word Count: 511
Notes: For comment_fic, for this prompt (posted there, but then edited and posted here after I noticed tense errors, which are my absolute least favorite typos to make). Takes place during "The Hard Part".

( If he wasn't the most intelligent person Sylar has spoken to in months, he wouldn't have bothered calling him. )

co: comment_fic, wc: 0500-1000, f: heroes, type: post-episode

Comments 2

tigriswolf March 30 2010, 00:15:19 UTC

I really like Sylar's stream-of-conciousness.

gladdecease March 30 2010, 01:33:03 UTC

That was something I didn't think I got across well in the first version, so I tried to emphasize it more this time. I'm really glad it worked for you!