Comments | glaenconer: Sometimes It Goes the Other Way

glaenconer

Sometimes It Goes the Other Way

Oct 17, 2007 10:51

Jack swallowed his pride like a shot of battery acid and kept it down long enough to take L. D.’s money. He needed it. Last bull of his rodeo career launched him high, but not quite into orbit and didn’t take it kindly when he landed under its nose. Left a crater Jack couldn’t climb out of without a helping hand, hospital bills being what ( Read more... )

brokeback, sometimes it goes the other way

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Sometimes It Goes cwby30 October 18 2007, 01:04:30 UTC

Evenin'.

Well, sometimes it does, and I hope it's going to go their way now. Read all nine parts today; they read almost like a short story, or like sitting around the campfire after dinner, telling a story straight through.

On to Alaska!

Thanks again.

torry28 October 18 2007, 02:53:52 UTC

I am sure Ennis didn't bring Alma along or he would not have written that note, and I love Jack for following his heart his compass aiming north.
A lovely chapter, thank you.
Torry

lizbird October 19 2007, 05:06:26 UTC

Alaska... perfect. Can't wait to see them together again and hope they have sense to make a better go of it this time.

120cassie October 20 2007, 18:15:33 UTC

Hi

I swore I wouldn't start another fic but....I did

I read all 9 chapters and love your style. Lovely short chapters which make ne feel like I've read pages and pages. You have written so many beautiful lines - very orignal.

I like the way you have kept the characters true to the OS as well.

Thank you
Julie