hey, nice one having jack and ennis in that P.E./showers/pissing stream (what's guy's obsession with peeing? LOL) environment - must have been a daunting and strange experience if you're gay... to have all you really want in front of you but unavailable at the same time (well, not everyone is like Jack... ha)
i love this sentence: the kiss jack planted on his once-locked lips made ennis feel like his shell had been blown off and he was now shiny and new.
hmm, i think it has something to do with being able to write your name out. :D it is kinda strange. imagine being a horny but confused or shy straight boy being forced to shower with girls. during puberty.... or even a girl, with boys. :/
hey, nice one having jack and ennis in that P.E./showers/pissing stream (what's guy's obsession with peeing? LOL) environment - must have been a daunting and strange experience if you're gay... to have all you really want in front of you but unavailable at the same time (well, not everyone is like Jack... ha)
:) This should be the perfect gnash-story for sienna.
lol, she has a story with them in high school -- best friends forever, right? i hope other authors have written in pissing contests before, it seems pretty natural. :D
Nobody writes boys at play like you do, you´re a goddamn poet. Their "first kisses" with the cigarettes and biscuits were soo hot and sweet. Ennis being so kinky makes me *squee*.
"jack, we're done peein." ennis was smiling, his afternoon worries faded from drinking. he looked down, watched the hand move up and down as jack played with himself freely. the moonlight was reflecting off ennis's teeth, but jack didn't see it
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Re: YOU'RE THE ONEgnashsangJuly 1 2009, 22:51:28 UTC
i thought you might like the kinky aspects! well, jack gave him ideas, heheeeheh.
ha! yeah i made jack go down first, then went back and changed the names and everything so it was ennis that took the initiative there. made sense, as jack was drunkest.
the dream was real, that's what started the whole story. i dream of fishies, and always have (see comment to denim_girl)
i forgot what movie that was in, but it was a western where they called it "rotgut" or gutrot, i totally forgot. :P ennis hates domestic life. jack ought to be the one with his hands in the dish pan. :D oops, did i say that? LOL.
I had a nice time this morning visiting with the boys. I liked the way this started out, very interesting because at first I wasn't sure which Jack & Ennis this was. :)
yeah it started out from a real dream i had. i dream of fish out of water all the time for some reason! they float in the air, it's odd...! glad you had a nice visit. :)
you're the one, robbie williams song! :D (well, SHE's the one) i love that song x3. after the dream, that song was driving this one shot on.
"She's the One"
I was her, she was me We were one, we were free And if there's somebody calling me on She's the one
We were young, we were wrong We were fine, all along If there's somebody calling me on She's the one
When you get to where you wanna go And you know the things you wanna know You're smiling
When you said what you wanna say And you know the way you wanna play You'll be so high you'll be flying
Though the sea will be strong I know we'll carry on Cos if there's somebody calling me on She's the one If there's somebody calling me on She's the one
the pic i did eons ago, in brokeback time. it's been shrunk and re-colored and tilted for this story. :D original manip
oh, crookedest, typo alert i bet. TIA, lol. and also, um, i have an interlewd to send you with B and J... xoxo
i love that song too!and angels,again of robbie williams. oh yes i remembered that, you posted it before. i'm toooo sleepy to catch typos now.tomorrow ok. :]
omg yes!!(i was like "B and J?bzuh?" at first then OOH!)omg yes please when?
oh it's okay, just if you see them... i read back and found like 25... ugh, lol.
sleep well,,, no spiders. :D
oh, i love angels too, and baby girl window... waaah. gosh, where did robbie go? i met him once at the troubadour in weho. he lit my cigarette. (i admit i followed him outside.) he was so nice. we sat in the same row watching the scissor sisters play live. he was nearly 20 years younger than me, but looked so worn! i think he's had a hard life... :/
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i love this sentence:
the kiss jack planted on his once-locked lips made ennis feel like his shell had been blown off and he was now shiny and new.
my sleeping-beauty-Ennis :)
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thanks, e. :) :)
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:) This should be the perfect gnash-story for sienna.
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XO
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"jack, we're done peein." ennis was smiling, his afternoon worries faded from drinking. he looked down, watched the hand move up and down as jack played with himself freely. the moonlight was reflecting off ennis's teeth, but jack didn't see it ( ... )
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ha! yeah i made jack go down first, then went back and changed the names and everything so it was ennis that took the initiative there. made sense, as jack was drunkest.
the dream was real, that's what started the whole story. i dream of fishies, and always have (see comment to denim_girl)
i forgot what movie that was in, but it was a western where they called it "rotgut" or gutrot, i totally forgot. :P ennis hates domestic life. jack ought to be the one with his hands in the dish pan. :D oops, did i say that? LOL.
cheers back, and thanks. ^_^
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oh i love that pic and you've done it great.i love the title too.you're the one.
off to crookedest.
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"She's the One"
I was her, she was me
We were one, we were free
And if there's somebody calling me on
She's the one
We were young, we were wrong
We were fine, all along
If there's somebody calling me on
She's the one
When you get to where you wanna go
And you know the things you wanna know
You're smiling
When you said what you wanna say
And you know the way you wanna play
You'll be so high you'll be flying
Though the sea will be strong
I know we'll carry on
Cos if there's somebody calling me on
She's the one
If there's somebody calling me on
She's the one
the pic i did eons ago, in brokeback time. it's been shrunk and re-colored and tilted for this story. :D original manip
oh, crookedest, typo alert i bet. TIA, lol. and also, um, i have an interlewd to send you with B and J... xoxo
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oh yes i remembered that, you posted it before.
i'm toooo sleepy to catch typos now.tomorrow ok. :]
omg yes!!(i was like "B and J?bzuh?" at first then OOH!)omg yes please when?
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sleep well,,, no spiders. :D
oh, i love angels too, and baby girl window... waaah. gosh, where did robbie go? i met him once at the troubadour in weho. he lit my cigarette. (i admit i followed him outside.) he was so nice. we sat in the same row watching the scissor sisters play live. he was nearly 20 years younger than me, but looked so worn! i think he's had a hard life... :/
b&j are already done, heh.
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