Undisclosed Desires | Chapter Two

[gnomess92]

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[burstoflight]

Awww that was cute! And I really believe Nate's never mopped before! LOL. And oooh the ending was very foreboding! Can't wait to see what happens! :)

[gnomess92]

thanks S! :D

[kellou24]

Can't believe Nate doesn't knows what a mop is. Love it!
Can't wait for more:D

[gnomess92]

hehe that's nate for ya ;) im pretty sure he doesnt! thanks for reading! :D

[nicensweet28]

Wow girl! You are on a roll :) Nate willing to help her clean the loft. He actually going to mop too. And he doesn't even know what it is. Imagaine if she ask him to help her clean the toilets lol :) I wonder if he would of helped.
Omg! Agnes I wonder what she has up her sleeve. If she does something bad to Jenny again. I hope she gets caught or gets what's coming to her. What goes around comes around. Can't wait to see what's next. And of course I'll be waiting :) !!!!

[gnomess92]

Thank you! hehe :D Rep I have to be on a roll, I have a remanding public! lol! :P

[claudia_12]

I love your fics!!!!

Completely addicted to them.
I'm always looking forward to new chapters!

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!! :D

I literally lol'd at the idea of Nate cleaning LMAO.

[gnomess92]

thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D so happy you like them hehe!

[claudia_12]

I don't like them, I hearts them haha

Really though, your stories pretty much read themselves. I loved Beyond the Words and this one seems even better. (If that's at all possible?)

Update! Update!:)

[gnomess92]

wow thanks so much! and two updates tonight hopefully! :D

[naeham]

basically caught up with ur new story...Seriously what's a mop ? Lol no I'm just kidding .. Hehe totally believable that he doesn't know lol update soon..x

[gnomess92]

thanks N! ;)