Set up for the purpose of criticism on my Alfred portrayal. Suggestions welcome.

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Oh, and, uh. To make the record known: I play him out of DCAU.

[ It's a lovely morning to be out and about fetching supplies. Unfortunately, to do this Alfred must open the door and leave.

...sigh.

Luceti is a contained mass of pure madness. ]

I do hope our guests were civilized enough to wipe their feet before launching their invasion on unsuspecting homes. Visitations can be over in a matter of days, but ( Read more... )

My apologies if anything should turn out to be delayed today, sir; it would appear we're in the midst of- [ THUD. That would be his journal hitting the ground and staying there for a few minutes. It's picked back up eventually, and Alfred very dryly finishes. ] Technical difficulties ( Read more... )

[ Unfamiliar territory is not a very desirable place to be for a man such as he; it involves a great deal of being confused and out-of-sorts, which he prefers to leave out of the picture for as long as he can in distressing circumstances ( Read more... )

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